Writing my research paper was a long and stressful process, as are most of my writing endeavors. Although this one was a little bit different because of how drawn out it was, I still managed to finish it. I
On reading your reflection to a paper that you have written, it shows you are a very talented writer. You have a lot of insight on the steady rise of obesity throughout the world and it makes the reader also intrigued into finding out what your paper has to offer. I really enjoyed reading your writing and hope you continue to write. Hope you have a nice day.
Writing my essay about obesity was a very informational experience. I learned a lot more about how genes affect the chances of obesity. I also realized that the reason the United States might be ranked among the
I am fully aware Stanton does not use PEDs but he he’s jacked and I liked the picture of him. And because of how far the players would be able to hit the ball, people would probably start to complain and then the parks would need to be expanded to make it harder to hit homers. Therefore more space would need to be filled and more vendors could f…[Read more]
I found many points in this very interesting and true but the internet can also make people less lazy and more active. For example, just yesterday I looked at a new website I friend of mine showed me that has many different techniques for working out. And everyone that becomes lazy makes that choice to use the internet to watch Youtube videos…[Read more]
I found this article very interesting due to its truth. Those who do not stay up to date with current events on social media are definitely more out of the loop. And this could be bad as those who are at a loss may feel awkward or like they are not in the right group and that could be bad for friends. A group of friends might change if some of the…[Read more]
Many years ago in the MLB there were names like Barry Bonds, Mark McGwire, and Babe Ruth. These were players that would hit home runs like nobody’s business, and part of this was because of their use of PEDs or p
I liked the idea you present in this argument. People often look back on the sport of baseball and see those for mentioned huge names, but forget about the peds involved. The sport was fine before and was only made less entertaining by these laws. I think it would be interesting to see a visual or textual statistic of the relationship between this law and baseball ticket/viewing numbers.
the notion that jobs would be created seemed a bit far fetched to me, while the revenue of a park may have dropped, did it drop enough to fire people? Also most of the jobs in baseball parks are from separate entities, meaning they work for another company that rents space, so if the park suffered the job is not lost only moved.
Hi Cullen. I was able to read the first paragraph and I immediately noticed the topic of Steroids and the usage of them; you should not use Stanton as your cover Image because I know for a fact that he does not use and performance enhancing drugs. The whole article was misleading because you decided to address job placement? Steroids and creating jobs are to very different topics. Also maybe not say “Thank you America” that just sounds very unprofessional. Thank you
I am fully aware Stanton does not use PEDs but he he’s jacked and I liked the picture of him. And because of how far the players would be able to hit the ball, people would probably start to complain and then the parks would need to be expanded to make it harder to hit homers. Therefore more space would need to be filled and more vendors could fill that space, which in turn creates more jobs. And I addressed job creation because people complain about it and it’s annoying so I decided to address it in a comedic manner. And I actually said you are welcome America. Again, for comedic purposes. Thank you for your response Ethan.
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