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  • Dear Michele:

    I am amazed by your publication, “Reflection on police brutality and racism”, to raise awareness about discrimination.

    One phrase that you highlight for me is “to help people understand the true nature of racism and what qualifies as discrimination.” It is important that people know the importance of discrimination. Many people…Read More

  • Dear Sofia:

    I am amazed by your writing, “I do not know if I feel happy or sad” because I learned from people that we should be happy when we win or lose because in life sometimes you win and sometimes you lose.
    A phrase that you write that stands out for me is “sometimes we win high and we feel happy for that” because that is the truth of life…Read More

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    So far the plot is about a child who accompanies his dad to the laundry, and the child takes his bunny and it is lost, then they return home and the child starts crying and his mother realizes that she cries for

    My lost bunny

    So far the plot is about a child who accompanies his dad to the laundry, and the child takes his bunny and it is lost, then they return home and the child starts crying and his mother realizes that...

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  • Estimada Veronica:

    Estoy asombrada por tu escritura ” Fuera las malas personas ” porque aprendí que no debemos tener envidia a las demás personas porque triunfan yo creo que todos tenemos la oportunidad de triunfar.

    Una frase que usted escribió que destaca para mi es “llegan personas que no te merecen porque no valoran todo el cariño que les das…Read More

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    So far the plot of “Ghost evil” is about a man who rents houses. One day a man and his daughter, his daughter in the evening a girl dressed in white that was very ugly and the girl tells him what he wants from

    The girl in the white dress

    So far the plot of "Ghost evil" is about a man who rents houses. One day a man and his daughter, his daughter in the evening a girl dressed in white that was very ugly and the girl tells...

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    • deer claudia
      I liked your post because there is something creepy and one part of you said ” One day a man and his daughter, his daughter in the evening a girl dressed in white that was very ugly and the girl tells him what he wants from her that is out” makes me feel creepy

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    Claudia commented on the post, Haze

    Dear Zyria:

    I am amazed by you poem, “Haze” because I learned from a new writing that I had never heard.

    A phrase that you write that stands out and became important to me is “You are my only true love” because many people have only one love and are not looking for other people just for fun.

    Thanks for your writing. I hope to see what you…Read More

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    So far the plot in A Summer to Die Molly and Meg were sisters. They both had different dreams, Molly’s dream was to get married, take care of her husband and have children. Meg’s dream was to have a career as a

    Enemy and sisters

    So far the plot in A Summer to Die Molly and Meg were sisters. They both had different dreams, Molly's dream was to get married, take care of her husband and have children. Meg's dream was to have a...

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    • Claudia,

      I loved your book summary! It really made me interested in reading the book. I particularly enjoyed how you drew a comparison to your own community and then discussed the similarities and differences. I would love to know a little bit more about what you thought of the story itself. Did it seem predictable or did you find yourself excited to turn the page? Would you recommend that others read it?

      I hope that you will keep writing book reviews because this one was very helpful. Thanks for sharing Claudia!

      Gwen

    • Dear Claudia:

      I am amazed for your post “ Enemy and sisters”, because even if I do not have sisters, I have seen how mys cousins treat their sisters.

      One sentence you write that stands out for me is “ The difference is that in my story the sisters end up being best friends and in my community they are still enemies. “ I think this is sad because between sisters you have to get along with them, because our brothers are important only they love us, they support, they take care of us, and they give us advice.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I would like to know about this story you read.

    • Estimada Claudia:

      Estoy asombrada por tu publicación “Enemy and sisters” porque es muy cierto aunque sean hermanos puede que se lleven muy mal y llegan hasta pasar problemas graves entre ellos.

      Una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es: “Desde entonces las hermanas se trataron muy bien y se tomaron como amigos.” Creo que esto es cierto porque hay veces que los hermanos no se llevan y no terminan de una buena manera.
      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque es interesante y hace que te enfoques mas en el texto.

  • Estimado Eduardo:
    Estoy muy asombrada por tu escritura porque aprendí de las luchas y de que no había escuchado que las luchas fueran tan populares.
    Una frase que usted escribió es ” hasta la prehistoria del ser humano y hoy en actualidad sigue esa tradición y ahora es muy popular” porque muchas personas hoy y antes las luchas son muy tra…Read More

  • Estimado Jose:
    Estoy asombrada por tu libro porque yo creo que no es bueno pelear porque al final no te ganas nada como te puedes lastimar o pasar algo peor.
    Una frase que usted describió para mi es “al pelear con freezer y esto significa que talvez no vuelva a pelear” yo creo que eso es algo que pelear esta muy mal.
    Gracias por tu escritura,…Read More

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    So far, my book is about some players who are on the same team and best friends, one day, since it is being practiced. Jets was sad and Alex who was his best friend was also sad but he did not worry that they

    Champs

    So far, my book is about some players who are on the same team and best friends, one day, since it is being practiced. Jets was sad and Alex who was his best friend was also sad but he...

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    • Dear claudia
      I am impressed by your post champs because… they had two friends that are best friends and they play for be the best players Thanks for you writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because… your posts are interesting are entertained and more essay for read what is a advantage for sacar the information more essay.

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    So far, The Tattoo is about two twins want to put on a tattoo of favorite band but their mom does not want to leave them because they do not like how they look, but they decided that they did not care what people

    The Tattoo

    So far, The Tattoo is about two twins want to put on a tattoo of favorite band but their mom does not want to leave them because they do not like how they look, but they decided that they...

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    An important purpose of our government, as stated in the preamble of the United States Constitution, is to ensure domestic tranquility. The president of the USA plays an important role to ensure that the actions

    Does Trump ensure domestic tranquility?

    An important purpose of our government, as stated in the preamble of the United States Constitution, is to ensure domestic tranquility. The president of the USA plays an important role to ensure that the actions of our government are...

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    So far the plot Blood revenge tries that Adrián and Laura were friends and were in a drug gang. They were very involved in drugs, they always left parties, they thought the owners of the whole city were all

    Venganza

    So far the plot Blood revenge tries that Adrián and Laura were friends and were in a drug gang. They were very involved in drugs, they always left parties, they thought the owners of the whole city were all...

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    • Estimada Claudia:
      Estoy asombrada por tu publicación “La Venganza” porque suena interesante del cual habla tu libro y llama la atención para poder leerlo. Es interesante el como Laura y Adrián era su comportamiento en el libro. El cómo la droga hace un efecto que te hace perder el control.
      Una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es: “This reminds me of a piece of news that I saw on television.” Creo que esto es asombroso por que nos das a entender que ves las noticias y estas enterada de lo que pasa en la ciudad o el mundo.
      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, por que es interesante los libros que nos compartes.

    • Estimada Claudia:

      Estoy asombrada por su publicación, “Venganza,” porque habla acerca de un tema muy controversial. Es muy interesante ese tema para mi. Es muy controversial porque se habla mucho sobre el narcotráfico.

      Una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es: “The difference is that in the news they found the killers and justice was done.” Creo que esto es muy cierto porque hay veces que si los atrapan y hacen justicia.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque me gusta ver lo que publicas. También me gusta como te expresas cuando escribes un libro.

      Samantha.

    • Estimada Claudia:

      Estoy asombrada por tu publicación sobre” la Venganza” aunque yo no he leído este libro por lo que escribes parece ser interesante.

      Una frase que escribiste que se destaca para mi es “justice was done” por que muchas veces la justicia si existe pero a veces existe la corrupción y encontramos personas que están afectadas por que no hay justicia, pero en ese caso sí existió.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque quiero aprender mas sobre lo que opinas sobre los libros que lees.

      Sofia Torres

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    Students online speech should be limited because of suicides have occurred, learning environment disrupted and causing more problems. Students online peach should be limited because of everyday  there are more

    Should Schools Be Allowed to Limit Students’ Online Speech?

    Students online speech should be limited because of suicides have occurred, learning environment disrupted and causing more problems. Students online peach should be limited because of everyday  there are more problems about bullying for example students use the internet...

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    • Dear Claudia,
      I totally agree with you on your post, “Should Schools be Allowed to Limit Students’ Speech?” because it is a reality, cyberbullying is no good. It is affecting victims physically, mentally, and emotionally with all of what cyberbullying causes.
      One sentence you wrote that stood out for me is: “Students online speech should be limited because of suicides have occurred, learning environment disrupted and causing more problems.” I think this is very true because when a victim gets bullied that is all that roams around a classroom setting during instruction, it is disruptive, such as a comment “Oh, did you hear about…”
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I like how you listed reasons of why schools should have the right/power to limit students’ online speech. No matter if it is off school limits, it happens at school too, lets just be honest.
      Jacquelin Monroy

    • Claudia,
      I enjoyed reading this piece on student speech online. Cyber bullying is a major problem in our society, and we aren’t doing enough to combat it. Cyber bullying has become so big that it is causing disruption in a school’s ability to operate and function because students do not have a solid enough support system in the school to perform at their full capacity. I also enjoyed how you brought up that students’ lives have been put into danger by cyber bullying. The number of tragic suicides that have happened because of cyber bullying are too high. Here is an article I think you might enjoy about how other forms of speech are limited and school. It lays out ways in which schools may be able to begin limiting online speech.
      https://www.theatlantic.com/education/archive/2014/04/do-students-still-have-free-speech-in-school/360266/

      Thank you, Claudia!

    • Hello Claudia,
      I loved your article about cyberbullying. I’m glad that there dialogue being brought up about the topic, and it’s important to find more resources and solutions to this issue. Here’s a webpage that has more research about the federal laws and programs you mentioned: https://www.psychologytoday.com/ca/blog/shame-nation/201902/cyberbullying-how-social-connectedness-may-help-victims

    • Claudia,
      You bring up a lot of good points. I like how you bring up multiple perspectives that are applicable to many groups of people, and you tie it together in that cyber-bullying can affect anyone and everyone. Children are mean and don’t recognize the impact that their actions and words have, it can certainly be harmful. I think you should expand on this topic and look more into the positives of not limiting students’ speech or looking more into the negatives. Issues similar to this have been brought to the Supreme Court to look at if the first amendment right (freedom of speech) applies to minors in public schools. Here’s a link: https://legaldictionary.net/tinker-v-des-moines/.
      Thanks Claudia!
      Grace

    • Claudia,

      You had some really solid arguments for why schools should limit the online speech of students. For example, “When young people have problems in their home or with friends outside the home, if affects them in school because they are only thinking about the problems and how they can solve them” this shows the reader a long term affect of cyberbullying, and it really solidifies your argument. One suggestion that I would make is to provide a clear thesis statement that outlines all of the points that you will discuss in your writing. This will allow for a more effective first paragraph and overall just improve the flow of your piece. I found this really helpful website that has statistics involving cyberbullying that I think you may find useful. https://www.stopbullying.gov/media/facts/index.html

    • Estimada claudia:

      Estoy asombrado por su publicación “Should Schools Be Allowed to Limit Students’ Online Speech?” porque es un tema muy importante que todos los alumnos deberían saber para evitar cualquier golpe de depresión o un suicidio por causa de esto.

      una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es :”Students online speech should be limited because of suicides have occurred, learning environment disrupted and causing more problems” creo que esto es significativo porque te dice la idea central del texto rápido.

      Gracias por su escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque estos temas son muy importantes para mi y la sociedad para evitar posibles golpes de depresión.

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    Estimada Evelyn:

    Estoy muy asombrada por tu escritura me pareció muy interesante porque si hay muchas personas que no tienen donde vivir y es importante que muchas personas lo sepan para que ayuden, las pulgas son unos animalitos chiquitos pero no son peligrosos pero no debemos vivir en ellos. Estoy muy contenta por tu escritura espero y ver lo…Read More

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