• Clarismar Maria's profile was updated 2 years, 1 month ago

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    Location: Bronx zoo, Bronx, NY.

    I’ve been here for a long time. I have heard, seen and felt many things, and  I have had the time to think about how much I would like to have life and not be a “Fake Rock”

    • Dear Clarismar,

      I am fascinated by your story, called “Clarismar’s Story,” because I got what are you trying to express about how someone feels when they are been ridiculed for their appearance.

      One part of your Story that stands out for me is where the rock asked Marine, the sea lion, if she thinks that the rock belongs to that place. I think this is beautiful because the sea lion said to the rock that she is really needed in that place because she is special.

      Another part that I enjoyed is where The Fake Rock don’t listen to the insults that the real rocks make. This stood out for me because that is what every person needs to do in that situation.

      Your Story reminds me of something that I witnessed before. One time many guys were saying bad things to a girl and she just defends herself and doesn’t listen to them.

      Thanks for your story I look forward to seeing what you make next because you make that everybody really concentrate in your writing that is very powerful too. I love it!!

      Best wishes with your art,
      Yehara Gutierrez

  • These photos are taken in one of the hallways of my school. I chose my school because it is one of the places where I spend the most time and I feel more comfortable and welcoming. (Click on any image to

    • These are beautiful pictures and beautiful words. It makes me happy to hear that like your school and that you value community.

    • I like your project pictures.its make me think about earth is become made of our community and how the sun support tree to become better world.

  • A Day in My Life
    This weekend I went with my family and friends to Playland. We had a really great time. (Click on any image to enlarge.)

    Special Photos

    • Hi! I love your group of images and the feelings you wrote on them. You have shown me that even one word with an image can give a new and deeper meaning to that image. I also really like the way you placed the word “Anxiety” along the rollercoaster!

  • Clarismar Maria's profile was updated 2 years, 2 months ago

  • Clarismar Maria became a registered member 2 years, 2 months ago

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