I am fascinated by your story, called “Clarismar’s Story,” because I got what are you trying to express about how someone feels when they are been ridiculed for their appearance.
One part of your Story that stands out for me is where the rock asked Marine, the sea lion, if she thinks that the rock belongs to that place. I think this is beautiful because the sea lion said to the rock that she is really needed in that place because she is special.
Another part that I enjoyed is where The Fake Rock don’t listen to the insults that the real rocks make. This stood out for me because that is what every person needs to do in that situation.
Your Story reminds me of something that I witnessed before. One time many guys were saying bad things to a girl and she just defends herself and doesn’t listen to them.
Thanks for your story I look forward to seeing what you make next because you make that everybody really concentrate in your writing that is very powerful too. I love it!!
These photos are taken in one of the hallways of my school. I chose my school because it is one of the places where I spend the most time and I feel more comfortable and welcoming. (Click on any image to
Hi! I love your group of images and the feelings you wrote on them. You have shown me that even one word with an image can give a new and deeper meaning to that image. I also really like the way you placed the word “Anxiety” along the rollercoaster!
This is a youth-powered social network that was started in 2003 by a group of teachers from local sites of the National Writing Project.
We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It's easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other's work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it's been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
If being part of such a community makes sense to you, we invite you to join us. We welcome all youth and any teacher interested in having students publish online and participate in the give and take of a social network like Youth Voices.