Dear Chelsie,

I am Kerly, and I am charmed by your story, A sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “A week ago my mom and I were sitting together, I was doing my homework, and my mom was selling clothes in front of the house. Mr Robert, an old friend of the family for a very long time, was passing by and he saw something that attracted him. I bought the clothes from my mom for $ 150, but never paid her for them. pay her the next day, but never did. So since then, I had to avoid him. ” I loved this paragraph of your story because it is something that once in our life will happen to someone.

This reminds me of an experience I once had with a friend in Ecuador, because a friend asked me to lend her $ 5 and never paid me.

Thanks for writing I hope to see what you write next, because I really like how you write your stories because they are so interesting.

From: Kerly Dutan

Chelsie,
This piece did a very good job describing who you are and what you enjoy. When you said “I am made of watching all the people pass by below me

and the noisy school children in red and black uniforms playing on the street.” I could relate to that because when I was young I would look out my window and watch people walk by on the street. Good writing.