Hi Cindy,
I thought this was a great post. I loved the word choice. I also agree that we should stop the violence occurring around the world. Nice job

Hi Cindy I thought everything was great and well said also it was a great post.I agree would everything that we should stop the violence occurring around the world.

Hi Cindy, I love this post. This post is filled with emotion and many different word choices. I look forward to seeing what you post next. Good poem keep writing!

Dear Cindy:

I am moved by your poem “Stop the Violence” because I can feel the emotion you are expressing. I can tell there are strong emotions behind every word you say. I agree with your statement, we should stop acting transparent.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “we live in a society where white is bright”, I think this is bold because your stating the truth that many people don’t want to accept, that as long as your white your promised a bright future.

Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because you know how to speak with passion and how to get you words across. Your confident in what you write and what you stand for. And I admire that about you.

Yadira

Hey Cindy,
I thought this poem was really good, it was a very good way to express your feelings about modern day news. Even though it was posted 11 months ago these choice of wording still aged well after George Floyd.
I really liked the choice of words and the flow of them, to really get your point across.