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  • Cindy.Orellana
  • Bronx, New York City, USA
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  • Dear unique Luyao
    I am reading about your beautiful poems
    called “Two poems for beautiful ocean,”
    Because I love it deeply.
    One part of your poem that stands out for me is your beautiful sentence and your expression
    I think this is so wonderful because you used your words to express a such great view.
    Another part that I enjoyed is where you des…Read More

  • Good job! I liked yours poem because you used stanzas and you describe the beach.

  • Good job! I liked yours poems because you used stanzas and u describe the beach.

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    Darks storm clouds rolling,

    coming to invade the sun

    taking over in he sky

    lightning, thunder

    rain pours down to re-nourish,

    Mother Nature self-healing.

    Rain

    Darks storm clouds rolling, coming to invade the sun taking over in he sky lightning, thunder rain pours down to re-nourish, Mother Nature self-healing.

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    • I like your poems how you describe the sky situation.I think you should some write about trees.

    • I like your poem, I like that you pick my picture and you give a other sense to a picture

    • Dear Cindy

      I am excited by your poem, “because the words you used to describe the ridge are so emotional
      One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you said “dark storm clouds rolling” I think this is interesting because clouds and storms change sometimes by weathering

      Another part that I liked is where you said ” mother nature self heading” This stood out for me because mother nature is a very nice term to talk about

      Your poem reminds me of something that I wrote once. One time i wrote abpout damaged of weathirng and how is the wind made from

      Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because whe you describe a bridge you used a lot of interesting and beautiful words

    • Dear Cindy,
      I am enjoying your poem called “Rain,”because you choose my picture to write the poem.

      One part of you poem that I like is “coming to invade the sun taking over in the sky, lightning.” That stands out for me because you describe the picture good. I think this is too pretty because you give another sense to a picture.

      Another part that I enjoyed is where “thunder rain pours down to re-nourish, Mother Nature self-healing.” This stood out for me because you talking too about the mother nature and this is smart.

      Your “Rain” poem reminds me of something that I made once. One time when was raining too hard .

      Thanks for your work. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because i like your poems.

      Best wishes with your art,
      Helen Miranda

    • me gusta por que es bonito pero algunas personan piensan diferentes yo soy de Honduras y los desastres naturales me quitaron parte de mi familia

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