Good start scholars! The comments will help you improve your work. The one additional comment i have is that you should think more deeply about how we can get jobs to have more pay and equal opportunities. Merely protesting without a specific demand of how to achieve those changes is bound to be less powerful than if you can offer a vision of…Read More

Ahmir’s suggestions are all very good. Some context could definitely help readers understand more about your issue. Since your solution idea is that the government should spend less on the military and nuclear weapons in particular, more explanation connecting to that would strengthen your message.

Good start, and you have a nice idea for the solution of providing mentors BUT you forgot to put that into your infographic! That should be included, and should be explained a bit more so viewers understand how mentors could help them deal with those challenges.

Clarify your facts: 90 shot …where? That is too low a number to be nationally, or do you mean shot and killed? OR do you mean unarmed? The fact needs more context and as Ahmir noted, a source. The therapy idea is an interesting one, but do you want them to just get it before they start working, or is it meant to be ongoing or in response to…Read More

Good start. Your infographic looks clean and readable, but could be improved with a bit more detail. Clarify HOW having more Latino law enforcement officers would help improve the deportation situation; you mention that in your write-up, but do not have it in your infographic. You also need to check your wording, and make sure you finish ideas……Read More