Dear Chole,

Your initial analysis was done very well. I can tell that you have thought deeply about the subject. I personally really like your word choice. Your word is strong and really adds a punch and it puts your work on a different level. The words you chose also helped get you get your point across.In addition, I love how your theme it was about dark and different. Your idea is very intriguing. I would love to talk to you about your idea. I can’t wait to see more of your work.

Jillian Wood

Dear Chloe, I liked your analysis because it a different interpretation i had of the poem. i Got a sense that the poet was visiting or recalling all the memories he had before he dies. The poet probably has an idea that he will die soon. However your analysis is interesting as well as different because you are implying that the poet has already passed away and is “on their way to eternity.

Dear Chloe, I really admire your incredible use of imagery. Almost as if the reader and you were at the park at the same time. One of your lines that stand out to me is ” As the sun comes down and it is time for the moon and stars to shine” because I actually tell what part of the day your talking about. I like that you didnt just say it was night but You gave the reader a perfect glimpse of how it looks. Both of our poems discuss that this place is an area where you escape. Especially when you say ” Where stress doesn’t exist”. Instead i rote in my peom about a racist free place. Thanks for Writing!

Dear Chloe :
I am jealous and happy about, your bio and how you described your experience in ASTROWORLD “<Chloè–BIO>,” because you got to go to a concert, i wish i would have gone i never been to one and its TRAVIS SCOTT!!!!! Like just seeing your idol is amazing. If i got to go to a Ariana Grande concert i’ll cry.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ At first, we had seats that were really high up from the stage, but one of my friends ended up knowing someone who was also at the concert who was able to get us General Admission floor seats. For those of you who don’t know what General Admission floor seats are, they’re the seats that are up close and personal to the stage.” I think this is magnificent because you got to see him closer. Your idol so close to the stage, like i’ll be so shook, and it was your first time so it was a even more amazing experience.

Another sentence that I pasted was: “ I was so close to Travis Scott, that we made eye contact and he smiled at me! .” This stood out for me because HE SMILED AT YOUUUU, that’s such a cool experience i wish it was me.
Your bio reminds me of something that happened to me. One time my mom took me to a meet and greet to meet this Spanish artist named Romeo Santo and his very big in the latin world so i was so happy and when i met him i froze and was shook that this was happening.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you have cool and fun experiences and i know you personally.

Dear Chloe,
You were very blessed and lucky to be able to go the concert, not only go to the concert but to also be able to sit as close as you were. What exactly was going through your head when he looked at you and smiled. i can relate to you when it comes to music.i don’t know how to play an instruments but the piano which i’m not very good at. what type of music are you more interested into?
Did you do anything specific to be good at math. like studying or just gifted when knowledge? i personally struggle with math. i would appreciate any advice you have that can possibly help.