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Jaime I think the points you brought up are true for many teens. When I got a job, it changed who I was as a person. It made me think about what I have and how hard it is to accomplish a goal. I think this is a lesson...

Ethan, I really enjoy reading about your topic, because today in the sports worlds it is such a big deal. I believe the NCAA is one of the most corrupt industry and it is a tragedy that individual players can not make money off their likeness. I think college sports...

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Why I’m Emotional As Hell View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • February 26, 2018

Angie, I raly enjoyed your poem. I think it is very hard to be very introspsective on your life and feelings and publish it for people to read. You put a lot of time and effort and the rhyme scheme is very impressive. Personally I like the realness your...

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How Geography Affects Personalities View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • February 26, 2018

Erica, I always did think people from various regions acted alike and I was very intrigued. I enjoy travel and saw how people interacted in California to Wisconsin all the way to Florida and I saw each region had their own distinct personality. I think geography plays a huge role...

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“Having the College Money Talk” View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • February 16, 2018

Hannah I think this topic is very important and especially is relatable for high school students transitioning to college. College has become very expensive and it is hard for some families to pay even if you are a brilliant student. It saddens me that people who want to learn...

Charlie I think your topic is very interesting. I agree that all though very expensive and time consuming I think budding a base in space is worth it. I think it could provide a lot of opportunities for the future of our Earth. It would be one step closer...

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Mental Health Stigma View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • February 9, 2018

Cicely, I think your post is one that should be talked about a lot more than it is. Mental health has become a type of embarrassment where if you have it you hide it, because you are worried you will be made fun of. The statistic of Utah really...

Hi Olivia, I found your article very interesting. I do believe athletes are very much so overpaid. Yes they are perfectionist at their craft but at what cost. Some basketball players will have a good season get paid a 10 million dollar contract not including endorsements and other outside...

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Gun violence in Philadelphia View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • February 1, 2018

Tyler, I really enjoyed your research on the topic. Gun violence has become a topic of normality which is not ok. For people who have not experienced it in their own city they do not know the pain and terror it brings to a community. I live in Salt...

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How Media Affects Sports View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • February 1, 2018

Deepu, I rally enjoyed your piece on how media has interacted with sports. I am a big fan of varying types of sports and I am always on Instagram snapchat and sports center to see the latest news. I think personally media has negatively portrayed our favorite athletes and...

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Times Up View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • January 12, 2018

I found your post very empowering. I have payed attention to the news and seen all different types of protest about sexual assault in the business place. I think this a topic that needs to be talked about more but in the right manner. I think right now people...

Johan I found your topic very compelling. Seeing a dream become a reality is very cool. With self diving cars becoming more popular I think legislative will need to take a stance like you said. I found it very fascinating how you said only a few governments have taken...

Cheryl I found your piece very intriguing, and very relatable. The amount of activity an average teenager does on a device connected to the internet is astonishing. The fact that too much information actually inhibits learning is very interesting. I have come to notice this when I try to...

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Why my brother is important to me View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • December 7, 2017

Matthew I really liked reading your post. The emotion you put in really made me attach to your story. I like how you said a quote your brother said, then elaborated on why you liked it. For example how you noticed your brother always wanted you to succeed more...

Maggie, I found your study on relations to brain and serial killers very interesting. I have studied serial killers such as the Zodiac Killer and Jeffrey Dahmer, and found what you said about the brain to be true about these killers. The most fascinating part to me is “When killing...

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My Poetry of Place View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • November 13, 2017

Cheryl, I really enjoyed reading your poem about home. I liked how you were able to create happy thoughts even when your home is far away. Going off to college and entering a new transition, it is important to keep thoughts that cheer you up close to your hear....

Denise I found your points very interesting and I agree with you. The way the players unite and conduct themselves is very admirable. They have every right to take a knee, and by doing it peacefully are teaching young kids how to protest for what they believe in. President...

Sofia I thought your views in your post were very interesting. Living in Utah in my whole life I have definantly seen a shift from the strong mormon presence to more liberal views. I have gone to Catholic school my whole life so I have always been around liberal...

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What Do We Stand For? View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • October 3, 2017

Daniel, I thought you brought up some very good points about what we as Americans stand for. You used good sources and I enjoyed how you pulled out your favorite quotes and even included a part of the Declaration of Independence. I also found it interesting how you wrote...

Jerome, I thought your topic was very interesting. I play football too and I never thought of that when I was injured this season. Why do you think this inequality exists? I found an article about racial inequality in college football that may help. https://www.si.com/college-football/2015/05/19/ncaa-problems-race Very unique topic. Please post about...

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Is Sexism still an Issue Survey View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • September 29, 2017

Moiranda, I think you picked an excellent topic to dive deeper into. I liked how you made it interactive and wanted to see your viewers opinion. I found an article that elaborates on sexism today to form background knowledge. https://www.theodysseyonline.com/sexism-in-todays-society What made you compelled to pick this topic? Please...

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Does poverty cause crime? View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • September 29, 2017

Javier, I really enjoyed your comment about the correlation of poverty and crime. I think it is a huge issue in our world today. I also liked how you made it personal as well. Some further things to think upon could be going deeper into economical status and looking...

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The NBA is in Trouble View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • September 25, 2017

Dominic I found your article very intriguing. I too believe the NBA is in trouble, but for different reasons. I think there is no clear face of the NBA at this time, and so the NBA is struggling to find an identity. I do like you point to Stephen...

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Life Without a Twin View Comment
  • @CHilton56
  • September 25, 2017

Kayden, I found this question very interesting and found myself wanting to learn more. I most intriguing part of the article you included was how twins grow off each other and from experience. This shows how early interaction with people your own age is important in early development. I...

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