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    The Influence of Expectations

    Whenever I prepare for a big test or even after taking a test, I always try to imagine the worst that could happen.  Some may think of this mentality is a negative way of

    The Influence of Expectations

    The Influence of Expectations Whenever I prepare for a big test or even after taking a test, I always try to imagine the worst that could happen.  Some may think of this mentality is a negative way of treating challenges,...

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    Americans have gone through many rough times, but we were always able to push through with overwhelming patriotism and confidence.  We had always thought that nothing can hurt America, after all we were the best

    Fear Changes Our Values

    Americans have gone through many rough times, but we were always able to push through with overwhelming patriotism and confidence.  We had always thought that nothing can hurt America, after all we were the best nation in the World....

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    Hey, I agree that no matter how a person talks, acts, and dresses, we should respect them as Americans (assuming they address themselves as Americans). The belief that hard work always pays off is usually true as well. I believe you can extend some of the points to substantiate them to improve your paragraph. Good work overall.

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    Eric commented on the post, Indivisualism

    I enjoy how you put multiple sources and poems into your poem and summarizing them while relating them to individuality. I really enjoy the point you made, but I do believe you can continue to build off your point and extend your paragraph as well.

  • FIrst, I would like to address that this passage had a lot of context in it, good job. I also like the fact that you incorporated a quote from a book in it, showing your appreciation to the rights and life you have now. I definitely agree how American is a mixed society effectively making it a melting pot. I do notice that there is a lot of…Read More

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