-
Eric wrote a new post
The Influence of Expectations
Whenever I prepare for a big test or even after taking a test, I always try to imagine the worst that could happen. Some may think of this mentality is a negative way of
Read MoreThe Influence of Expectations Whenever I prepare for a big test or even after taking a test, I always try to imagine the worst that could happen. Some may think of this mentality is a negative way of treating challenges,...
-
Eric wrote a new post
Americans have gone through many rough times, but we were always able to push through with overwhelming patriotism and confidence. We had always thought that nothing can hurt America, after all we were the best
Read MoreAmericans have gone through many rough times, but we were always able to push through with overwhelming patriotism and confidence. We had always thought that nothing can hurt America, after all we were the best nation in the World....
-
Eric commented on the post, One Promise to All
Hey, I agree that no matter how a person talks, acts, and dresses, we should respect them as Americans (assuming they address themselves as Americans). The belief that hard work always pays off is usually true as well. I believe you can extend some of the points to substantiate them to improve your paragraph. Good work overall.
-
Eric commented on the post, Indivisualism
I enjoy how you put multiple sources and poems into your poem and summarizing them while relating them to individuality. I really enjoy the point you made, but I do believe you can continue to build off your point and extend your paragraph as well.
-
Eric commented on the post, What do you value most as an American?
FIrst, I would like to address that this passage had a lot of context in it, good job. I also like the fact that you incorporated a quote from a book in it, showing your appreciation to the rights and life you have now. I definitely agree how American is a mixed society effectively making it a melting pot. I do notice that there is a lot of…Read More
- Load More Posts
Youth Voices is an open publishing and social networking platform for youth. The site is organized by teachers with support from the National Writing Project. Opinions expressed by writers are their own. See more About Youth Voices. Terms of Service. Privacy Policy.
All work on Youth Voices is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License