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One Piece View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • January 21, 2022

Having watched one piece for 950 episodes, I think you effectively portrayed the meanings and analogies that are conveyed in this anime/manga. I liked how you finished this book review with the comment, will he become the strongest pirate, as the series has not finished yet and none of...

One Piece View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • January 21, 2022

Having watched one piece for 950 episodes, I think you effectively portrayed the meanings and analogies that are conveyed in this anime/manga. I liked how you finished this book review with the comment, will he become the strongest pirate, as the series has not finished yet and none of...

Aren’t We All The Same View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • January 21, 2022

I like how you started this poem with questions and effectively argued the nonsense that racial discrimination is. Those questions hooked the reader and gave this poem a powerful stance using repetition as well as addressing the issue in our society. I like how you effectively portrayed your opinions...

I like the topic choice and noticed that you applied your own opinion to the argument which is crucial when making a post like this. There are many issues that arise when talking about college athlete payment. I think they should receive money for certain aspects such as their...

To an owl View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • December 10, 2021

I liked how you used the same style of syntax throughout your poem. The visual imagery paints a vivid picture of the owl traversing the landscape. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and hope to read more like this in the future.

little me to old me View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • December 10, 2021

I liked how your poem developed from past to present. I found it interesting how you used the same scenario to describe two very different feelings. I also liked the concluding sentence, portraying that you will be on top some day. I liked how you developed your poem and...

Suffering from Food Insecurity View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • December 10, 2021

I liked how you introduced the topic and described the problem that is affecting many people across the world. I would have liked to see more of a solution that is going on in the real world and described how we can contribute to end this problem. I appreciate...

“Room” Book Review View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • December 10, 2021

This book review gave the main concepts of the story and provided extra insight into the deeper meaning behind the themes introduced. I liked how you provided more information from the website of the author and established a full perspective of the writing. I hope to read more from...

Loneliness View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • November 5, 2021

Reading this made me want to check up on the others around me to make sure they are doing okay and don't feel disengaged. I loved what you had to say and you're interpretation of the article was flawless. This subject is crucial to talk about and you did...

New State Voting Laws View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • October 19, 2021

I really enjoyed reading this comment and argument. I liked how you analyzed both sides to this argument and gave your solution to this problem. This issue is an important aspect of voting and I agree with your opinions on this problem. It's important to making the process thorough...

Funny, Nice, Smart, and Friendly! View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • October 19, 2021

I noticed that there was a lot of redundancy within this writing. It's important to bring up a topic, explain it, and move on to the next rather than bringing up the same topic again and again. It's also important to give your sentences more meaning and setting up...

The Sky is Going to Kill Me View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • October 19, 2021

"I know because the have trees told me" I think this line within your poem could use some revision. I'm not sure if this was a spelling error but the have within this sentence breaks the flow and rhythm that was followed in the rest of the poem. I...

I never thought that this type of study could be applicable and I'm sure there are some outliers from this study, but this is quite an interesting perspective. I liked how you related this study to your personal life and utilized your own experience in comparison to this study....

Is Video Gaming Considered a Sport View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • September 24, 2021

I think gaming is a sport because of the time it demands and the motor skills required when participating. Sitting in a chair for hours on end can cause some harmful effects on your body but eating unhealthy has nothing to do with gaming being a sport. These esport...

Backwards Benefit View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • September 24, 2021

This post portrays the exact problem with greed in the world today. "Money means power and power means more money which creates a never ending staircase of corruption..." This quote describes the exact reason why money is such an issue that can never go away. Everyone needs money in...

Dealing with the Hate View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • September 24, 2021

This poem was brilliant in it's way of relating the author to a positive change in the world. I love how you incorporated your surroundings and beliefs to describe the person you are and wish to be. I look forward to reading more posts by you in the future.

Being a student athlete, I find that the points made within this comment are accurate. Having to manage my time properly and making sure to get assignments done quickly has become a great habit of mine. It's interesting to see that these student athletes are performing better on tests...

"I think that how President Trump chose to approach the fact that NFL players were silently protesting was terrible." You're comment on how President Trump reacted directly mirrors how I felt on this incident. Having watched this on live television, I believed these players were doing the right thing...

Is having culture intelligence important? View Comment
  • @CharlesJudge
  • September 15, 2021

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