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Charissa wrote a new post
Read MoreBooker T. Washington Middle School at 108th between Amsterdam & Columbus is a place I grew up, from the age of 6 years old. Booker T. Washington was a place where I went every day after school throughout the...
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Dear Charissa:
I am excited about your post, “A place I will never forget” because you are describing how you felt when you were doing that kind of thing and even if you change the program, those memories will remain in your heart.One phrase he wrote that caught my attention is “As a group, we will always be at Booker T Washington Park, watching people play basketball or like the children we were good morning” I think this is exciting because before coming to the States United, I played soccer with my friends, we challenged other grades, that was when I was in sixth grade and you said that it is something you will remember, I remember it a lot because until now they were very beautiful moments when I was going to Mexico for my house there is a court and with all my neighbors and my friends, we play and have a great time.
Thank you for writing. I hope to see what you write next, because I would like to know if you have more beautiful memories, oh, if you got into new programs and could tell how your life is going at this age.
Nancy
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Charissa wrote a new post
Read MoreMy first impressions of the poem "To My Dear and Loving Husband" were how Anne Bradstreet wrote this poem to prove her or maybe someone else's point of view of her love to a certain someone. One of her...
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In My opinion I think true love is not a thing because their is nobody on this planet that is going to be the right one for you theirs always gonna be people that hurt you and come in your life to ruined it and their is nobody that’s going to be their at the end of the day except your family. Why I say that is because now days people are so carless But even today’s life people call you when they need you but when they do that you question yourself why do you need to help them when your in a situation like this they don’t help back and when you need them their not their for you.
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Charissa wrote a new post
In the four lines of the first stanza, Bradstreet writes:
If ever two were one, then surely we.If ever man were loved by wife, then thee. If ever wife was happy in a man,Compare with me, ye women, if you
Read MoreIn the four lines of the first stanza, Bradstreet writes: If ever two were one, then surely we.If ever man were loved by wife, then thee. If ever wife was happy in a man,Compare with me, ye women, if you can. What...
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Charissa commented on the post, Anne Loftus Playground
Dear Angelina:
I am exuberant by your poem “ Anne Loftus Playground” because one of my favorite places is park also that i use to go everyday after school to be with my friends.
One part of your artwork that stands out for me is where you spoke about how much you use to love the place so much but you grew out of it,because that’s how i also fee…Read More -
Charissa commented on the post, Anne Loftus Playground
Dear Angelina:
I feel exuberant when I read your poem “ Anne Loftus Playground” because one of my favorite places is also a park that i use to go everyday after school to be with my friends.
One part of your piece that stands out for me is where you spoke about how much you use to love the place so much but you grew out of it, because tha…Read More - Load More Posts
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Dear Manuela:
I am amazed at your comment on “Washington Middle School” because they talk about school and a basketball game. I am from Mexico but I live in California. One phrase you wrote that makes me interesting is “When I was young, I used to be apart of the dancing crew and also ran track for a couple of years.” Because he speaks like he was a person who went and liked to walk partying.Thanks for your comment I hope to see what you write next because I was interesting.