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  • Calvin commented on the post, Open Your Eyes

    Dear Piper, I am fascinated by your poem. To me, the main message of your poem is all the bad things that are happening right now and how we should realize it. I think this because you pointed out a lot of events that has happened recently. I like how you use the literary device of anaphora with “Open your eyes”. Using that literary device made me…Read More

  • Calvin commented on the post, Why Not?

    Dear Naveen, I think that you prove a really good point in your poem, “Why Not?”. It is true and it shows how the gaming industry makes a lot of their money. One line that stands out is “Who has the cooler looking outfit’s”. This quote shows an important message because the in-game items are so hyped up that if you don’t have it, you wouldn’t fit…Read More

  • Calvin commented on the post, Why Not?

    Dear Naveen, I think that you prove a really good point in your poem, “Why Not?”. It is true and it shows how the gaming industry makes a lot of their money. One line that stands out is “Who has the cooler looking outfit’s”. This quote shows an important message because the in-game items are so hyped up that if you don’t have it, you wouldn’t fit…Read More

  • Dear Daniel, I love the topic of your blog. I think these ideas to stop and prevent violence are really smart. I totally think law enforcement should bond with the community. One question I have is that did this project actually lower gun violence percentages? And what other steps can we take to prevent gun violence inside our own community…Read More

  • Hey Kanika, I really like the topic you chose to talk about. I agree with a lot of the points you made, especially the one that mentions that a lot of single parent households can’t really afford to take care of their kids and pay off rent at the same time. One question that I have is what do you mean by “New community members are increasing the…Read More

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