• An important purpose of our government, as stated in the Preamble of the U.S. Constitution is insuring domestic tranquility.  The president of the U.S. plays an important role in ensuring our government’s ac

  • Dear, Jose
    I am impressed by your essay, “Restricting Online Speech in the Name of Students Safety”, you convey your message clearly and persuade me towards your point. I really like your introduction where you make your stance on how it is the schools responsibility to stop/prevent cyber-bullying. With that thesis it helps me know that I will be…[Read more]

  • Imagine you find out some kids from your school created a Facebook page dedicated to making fun of you. How would you feel? See we were given a right, a right that is protected by the First Amendment to the

    • Dear Brigney
      I am impressed by your essay “Cyberbullying” because you demonstrate situations that really happen. Also, using this strategy pulls me towards your side. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “Imagine you find out some kids from your school created a Facebook page dedicated to making fun of you. How would you feel?” I think this is strong. This gives strategy gives me a lot of emotions towards this situation. Thanks for your writing. I look forwards to seeing what you write next, because you add a lot of detail and real life situations. This gives a lot of persuasion on pulling me more towards your side.

      Rosa Fregoso

    • Wow Brigney, this post about cyberbullying is amazing. The details and the examples you used were so vivid and placed so well in your essay that it made the story line so clear. Whoever reads this genius essay their eyes will be open to the truth about cyberbullying including what damage and harm it does to students and teachers. Heres a website that I thought would help you continue your essay if you wish to expand your essay…https://www.stopbullying.gov. Thank you so much for your essay and ideas.

    • Great article, Brigney! You had a very compelling argument, especially when you discussed how cyberbullying goes beyond the screens and carries over in person, causing disruptions in school. Based on your post, I think you would enjoy this article (https://learning.blogs.nytimes.com/2014/10/31/how-should-schools-address-cyberbullying/). I look forward to reading your future posts!

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  • Dear Yasmin:
    I am saddened by your post, “Do The Police Deserve Our Trust”, because I don’t think it is right for a young 9 year old child to have to see the terror in their parents faces each time a police officer drives by their home. People need to feel safe in their community and especially in their own homes. Uniforms are their to prote…[Read more]