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    Desdemona

    1.3.208-218

    My noble father,

    I do perceive here a divided duty:

    To you I am bound for life and education;

    My life and education both do learn me

    How to respect you; you are the lord of duty;

    I am

    Othello Close Reading

    Desdemona 1.3.208-218 My noble father, I do perceive here a divided duty: To you I am bound for life and education; My life and education both do learn me How to respect you; you are the lord of duty; I am hitherto your daughter: but here's...

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    An article produced by CNN states that “A Colorado third-grader was suspended after shaving her head to show support for a friend battling cancer, because she’d violated her school’s dress code banning shaved h

    Uniform policies

    An article produced by CNN states that “A Colorado third-grader was suspended after shaving her head to show support for a friend battling cancer, because she'd violated her school's dress code banning shaved heads. Her parents expected the school...

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    • Brooklyn,
      the topic of school uniforms and dress codes is a very big, though its not one that is talked about a great deal. I think it should be talked about more because of how little it is talked about. I also can see the sexist points as it makes no sense for a girl to have to wear a skirt/dress to look good, when pants are functional and they can look good. I found an article that talks about the good and the bad of the dress code, https://www.tweentribune.com/article/teen/dress-codes-good-thing-or-bad-thing/. Thank you for sharing this and I hope to read more from you in the future.

    • Brooklyn,
      We should be able to have the right to express ourselves and School systems are making it difficult for us to show affection to each other. Without support we will continue to be curl when one is trying to bring on a change. I really appreciate you making this post to inform everyone about this.

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    “A Colorado third-grader was suspended after shaving her head to show support for a friend battling cancer, because she’d violated her school’s dress code banning shaved heads. Her parents expected the school to

    School Dress Codes

    "A Colorado third-grader was suspended after shaving her head to show support for a friend battling cancer, because she'd violated her school's dress code banning shaved heads. Her parents expected the school to make an exception for such a brave...

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    • Brooklyn,

      Thank you for sharing this post I found it very intriguing. This is something that is very easy to relate to because of hour hair and dress code policies. I think administrations at schools should give students a voice to allow them to express the feelings and emotions they have towards a subject in the hand book. I know a student at our school, Judge Memorial, overturned a hair rule due to his ethnic culture. The story about the girl supporting her friend is a great example of caring for another human. I feel that is the students choice and should be allowed as it supports a great cause to a dear friend. Do you think that rules at our school will change due to more students standing up for rules in the handbook?

    • Brooklyn,
      This is a very great post although it is a very hard topic to fight. The federal government only has say on what public schools are doing not private schools. In an instance of that happening at Judge the Supreme Court could not do anything to over rule their dress code rules since its a right of the private schools to be allowed to make their own dress code. I am in favor of your argument that dress codes need to be loosened although it is very hard to tackle that since it would only be for public schools and the majority of public schools have very loose dress codes.

    • Hey Brooklyn! This is a debate that has been raging since before we were even born and honestly? It drives me nuts. Back when my grandmother went to school, her public school (without a uniform of any sort) wouldn’t even let girls wear pants. It’s interesting how school rules on dress and expression change with the times. I think that the amount of sexism in most school dress codes is ridiculous, many having strict rules against girls’ bra straps showing but nothing on guys not wearing shirts. The example you used about the girl supporting her friend who had cancer is just another in long list of strange and unusual rules, typically ones that have no real reasoning behind them. I can’t wait to see where you go with this!

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    There is a big debate about girls and their school uniforms whether or not girls wear their uniforms appropriately during school. There have been multiple cases about girls who have stood up for what they think is

    Girl School Uniforms

    There is a big debate about girls and their school uniforms whether or not girls wear their uniforms appropriately during school. There have been multiple cases about girls who have stood up for what they think is right when...

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    • Hi Brooklyn, I am interested in your research topic. In my opinion, students should wear school uniform but schools should not be too strict about uniform. Students should be able to use their imagination to make some proper changes about the uniform so that everyone is unique and students will enjoy wearing them. However, teenagers make poor choices and teenagers can’t control themselves.
      Here is useful link: http://www.kingsnews.org/articles/the-restrictions-of-school-uniform

    • Brooklyn, this is an interesting subject. At Judge, the girls and boys wear the same uniform (different models for gender but still same idea), so there is no gender enforced uniform for those who don’t identify with a gender, however I have personally seen boys wearing shorts so short that if girls were to wear them, they would definitely be dress coded. There is also a big issue with the cheerleaders not being allowed to wear spanx in front of the football players because they get “too distracted”. It would be interesting to hear your personal experience with the Judge uniform. I look forwards to it.

    • Brooklyn,
      The stories you found are very compelling and I think it reflects what the problems with uniform really are. I think it’s important that the girls aren’t distracted from learning by having to put so much time into considering something so minimal. I think you would be interested in researching the prom dress codes schools enforce too (http://www.refinery29.com/2017/02/142248/prom-season-sexist-dress-preapproval-policy). The reach has gone too far in my opinion, but I am curious to see where you go with it.

    • Brooklyn,
      thank you for sharing about this topic. I believe that it is a big issue, especially at judge. We should not have to cover ourselves up so that thew boys can focus on their schooling and academics. It is somewhat of an injustice, and I am not okay with it.
      Check out this article, I think you will enjoy it.

      Arguments and Rebuttals


      Thanks!

    • Hi Brooklyn, great post? When talking about “why” girls are being accused, you should give some more points on “how” they are being accused of breaking code. I along with other students have seen this happen to many people during the school year, but in some cases what actions that the school did were necessary; as a private institution we sign a form where we agree to follow school conduct, I believe we should just properly follow there rules. I do agree in the opinion that we should have seasonal dress codes though, students should be able to dress more “freely” but at the same time properly-when writing about your topic, try to create more of a 2-sided argument.
      You can read or “wonderful” principal statement about “lead with their hearts along with their minds”
      https://www.judgememorial.com/apps/pages/index.jsp?uREC_ID=256068&type=d&pREC_ID=585752

    • Hi Brooklyn! I enjoyed reading your post and could relate to the restrictions of the dress code. When I was in middle school the administration set a dress code that restricted girls from wearing leggings. When students asked why they did this, their answer was always that it was a distraction to the boys. Yes this is an easy way to get rid of this issue, but is it the best and most fair way to go about it? I don’t believe so.

    • Brooklyn, I find this topic very relatable, especially at our school. It seems that it is only girls who get in trouble with violating the school dress code or the school uniform. I believe that uniforms are a great thing, but they need to be more accommodating for girls. Obviously boys and girls wear different things and schools need to be accepting and accommodating of that. Here is an article that you may like: https://www.cnn.com/2017/05/30/health/school-dress-codes-body-shaming-girls-parenting/index.html

    • Hey Brooklyn, as I am sure you can see, your post is one many have a feelings about. At my school boys and girls where the same exact uniform. The issue I have with it is the fact that girls can be written up on more things than boys, including our bra color. I think this is ridiculous and a far bigger issue than ‘distractions’. There’s nothing punitive there.

    • Hey, Brooklyn. I really like what you are saying here, and totally agree with it especially in the context of our school. The restrictions are very well laid out, but many of them are ridiculous and obviously directed at the girls. If guys break the same rules, such as rolling shorts and shirts, there are rarely consequences whereas girls always get in trouble for it. Here is an interesting article by CNN about this topic: https://www.cnn.com/2017/05/30/health/school-dress-codes-body-shaming-girls-parenting/index.html. I’ll look forward to your next post.

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    There seems to be a lot of controversy about uniforms and the dress codes. I go to a private Catholic school so I understand what is happening around. Girls seem to get in trouble a lot more for the dress code

    Do school uniforms discriminate against girls?

    There seems to be a lot of controversy about uniforms and the dress codes. I go to a private Catholic school so I understand what is happening around. Girls seem to get in trouble a lot more for the...

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    • Brooklyn, I am astonished by your post. I like how you bring up the points about girls getting body shamed for what they wear and how boys get in trouble less for dress code than girls. I agree with your post because I saw this same issue in our public high school. A girl’s group in my school decided to confront admin at our school in a meeting on how bias they were being on dress code for boys and girls, and eventually they started to have the same expectations for boys and girls. These past three years we have had more freedom in how we choose to dress like. Your post helped me recall this accomplishment in our school. I want to thank you for writing about this topic!

    • Brooklyn I found your post to be very compelling and I agree with the issue at hand. I attend a Catholic, private school as well and I have personally experienced this issue from the school’s administration. Here is another article about school dress codes body-shaming girls that I think you would find interesting: https://www.cnn.com/2017/05/30/health/school-dress-codes-body-shaming-girls-parenting/index.html

    • Brooklyn,
      I am really inspired by this post because I am doing my senior project on gender norms in schools and this is a very popular topic. I too think that girls are more discriminated than boys regarding dress codes and it is still happening today which is really bothering. You are right, there needs to be a way to talk about this especially in schools and at home.

    • Brooklyn,
      I think this is a really interesting topic, and I also recently made a post about it. One of the articles I looked at was this one https://www.motherhoodthetruth.com/school-uniforms-destroying-body-image/ that a mother wrote about her daughter’s school uniform damaging her self esteem, which I think is a huge problem with uniforms. I think uniforms often feminize and only cater to a certain body type, one which most people do not have. As someone who has had trouble finding well fitting and flattering clothes since a very early age, only to be forced into a school uniform myself that does not cater positively to anything that looks good on me, I feel discouraged wearing a uniform and am anxiously awaiting the next time I can trade in my khakis for jeans, not because I don’t like the color or anything, but because of the fit schools make us buy uniforms in. This is a problem that I think really needs to be addressed, and not for any superficial reasons, but because I firmly believe that uniforms damage body image.

    • Brooklyn,
      This topic really interested me because it is different than anything on Youth Voices and its so relatable. You said that girls more frequently get in trouble for their dress code and I completely agree with that statement. There has been times where I have been called into the office for “giving myself the wrong image” with what I wear. Clothing is an expression of yourself and although we have to wear uniforms, I think individuality is important. I can’t wait to hear more from you because I am very interested in your argument.

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    “Planned Parenthood is a non-profit organization that provides reproductive health services in the United States and internationally. In 2014, federal and state governments provided the organization with $528 mil

    Keep the Planned Parenthood's Open!

    "Planned Parenthood is a non-profit organization that provides reproductive health services in the United States and internationally. In 2014, federal and state governments provided the organization with $528 million in funding (40% of its annual budget). The majority of this funding comes from...

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    • Hello Brooklyn, I am interested in your topic. Planned Parenthood is a really good way to prevent unintended pregnancy. Being a parent is not a easy responsibility and parent need to get ready for that. If not, they can make their own choices. “Planned Parenthood says it prevents an estimated 579,000 unintended pregnancies per year.” according to CNN. This statistics is significant which means Planned Parenthood is a good way and people need to have place to seek out help when they want.
      Here is useful resource: http://www.cnn.com/2015/08/04/health/planned-parenthood-by-the-numbers/index.html

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    These past few months have been very difficult for the Citizens of the United States. Many of us don’t think the United States are very “united.” There have been many riots and protests that have been caused by

    We No Longer Stick Up For Each Other

    These past few months have been very difficult for the Citizens of the United States. Many of us don't think the United States are very "united." There have been many riots and protests that have been caused by the...

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    • Thanks for writing about this topic. It has been on my mind lately. America is getting more and more polarized, especially over political issues. The divide between liberals and conservative is getting scary. Compromise is a thing of the past, especially in the lawmaking bodies of the US. The senate and house of representatives can’t get anything bi-partisan done these days, as most people vote on party lines. I saw an interesting TED talk about how we as a society can heal this divide. https://www.ted.com/talks/jonathan_haidt_can_a_divided_america_heal

    • This is such an important topic to talk and write about. American’s these days especially in the political atmosphere seem to be butting heads more often than not, causing extreme tension where there should be unity and hard work done. Our political parties in the past year have grown further apart, instead of standing together. Today, the factor of political correctness is what both parties try to “one up” each other on. I watched a Ted Talk on how to be emotionally correct, which I hope in some way can show the compassion that is direly needed in this country. https://www.ted.com/talks/sally_kohn_let_s_try_emotional_correctness

    • I don’t believe it’s a matter of America needing “someone” to fix our problems. I believe racial issues grow within households, and communities first. There needs to be more conversations about how everyone has their own personal biases, and can sometimes begin to believe stereotypes that their family or society has breed them to believe. The United State’s upward mobility is a low 7%- meaning there is a gap in the distribution of economic and academic opportunities. Statistically families of color are more likely to live in lower income neighborhoods, which limits their children to schools within a zip code rather than their academic abilities. White families are usually in more middle and upper class neighborhoods so they are not subjected to lower qualified schools because there is usually more funding put into the schools near them. If a family can not afford private schooling, then they remain stuck in this cycle. Education is the key to solving inequality, but if there is no adequate access then there is no permanent solution.

    • What steps do you think we can take to change this? Is it possible to fix? How can we do it locally? Globally?
      -Lexi

    • Dear Brooklyn
      I am concerned about your post because it’s impacting people and children all over the United States. Also many of us are against Trump because he’s tearing apart families that have struggled are their lives and are still going through tough times.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ We no longer stick up for each other and are constantly at battles with one another for our own opinions.” I think this is true because many people are arguing on who’s side to be on and it leads to violence.
      Another sentence that appealed to me: “ We are having not only political issues but cultural as well” This stood out for me because it’s very typical and I see it every day. I see it on the news, and I see it at school when students start to take on negative influences and use it.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because it connects to my daily life and it impacts children and older people all over the world.

    • Brooklyn,
      You make some very important claims in this post, but without many facts to back it up. Next time, I suggest sprinkling in some evidence to support this idea. In addition, it might be beneficial to add something more than just an opinion, like give suggestions for remedies of this issue or identify other causes. It’s a good start though.

    • I also don’t think that we all need to agree on something. It’s important to have different views in order to have an open mind. I would be interested to hear what you think about this article, which argues that the United States have never been divided. https://bigthink.com/scotty-hendricks/why-is-the-united-states-so-divided-simple-it-was-never-united-at-all

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    Drinking in colleges has always been something that the students do for experience and to have fun. The downside to that is the fact that many people die or become sick from alcohol poisoning. Some of the reasons

    Alcohol in College

    Drinking in colleges has always been something that the students do for experience and to have fun. The downside to that is the fact that many people die or become sick from alcohol poisoning. Some of the reasons people...

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    • Good job brooklyn!
      I completly agree with you that alchol is a serious issue for college students and something that needs to be dealt with. College is s place to have fun and learn and alchol binging can ruin that experience. I found those statistics very surprising and it helped give me a better understanding of the size of the issue.

    • Hi Brooklyn,
      I really enjoyed reading your article, and I completely agree with you that this is a big issue right now. I also agree that lots of people chose to drink alcohol because they think it will make you cool and mature. However, there a lot of consequences when making these kinds of decisions. In addition, a lot of students in high school are also experiencing alcohol which is very concerning. The only way to solve this, in my opinion, is to enforce the rules and to provide harsher consequences for under-age drinking.

      Good Job on your article!
      -Eric

    • Brooklyn, I agree with you that this is a serious topic that we should be talking about. Many students in college drink to fit in or to have fun but thankfully not as many students are abusive drinkers. I think it’s important that we educate students to realize the consequences they could face from abusing alcohol and what it could mean for their future.

    • Hi Brooklyn,
      Your article was very interesting to read because it is a serious problem in America. American drinking culture is becoming more and more dangerous, especially in college students, and it is a problem that has to be addressed. The statistics were great on supporting your point and strengthened your argument.

    • Great job Brooklyn! I agree with you. I also think college kids are scared to report when a peer gets alcohol poisoning because of the consequences, but recently the law has changed so that you can’t get punished if you call and get help for a peer. I also think college is a great place to have fun, meet people, and educate yourself further, but some things should be done in moderation.

    • Brooklyn, I found your article very intriguing. I agree this is a serious issue in college and high school, but I think the reason why we have so many incidents involving alcohol poising and other related fatalities is that our society makes it a taboo to drink. Americans make drinking such a taboo that by the time we get the opportunity to have alcohol, it becomes an issue and excessive. I truly believe that when alcohol is introduced earlier and talked about without making it a taboo, there will be less desire to excessively drink. I found this article, (https://www.alcoholrehabguide.org/resources/college-alcohol-abuse/) about college alcoholism, that you might find interesting to read. Your post was informative and enjoyable to read. -Mae

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    I am actually not very educated on this topic. I know that there are thousands of deaths each year due to the access of hard drugs that people use each day. These drugs include heroin, cocaine, meth, etc. Many of

    What are the rates of death affected by drug use?

    I am actually not very educated on this topic. I know that there are thousands of deaths each year due to the access of hard drugs that people use each day. These drugs include heroin, cocaine, meth, etc. Many...

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    • I really liked that you chose this topic to write about and how you tied it into the homeless population we have today. I liked that you listed what you wanted to know about the issue and then showed what you found out about it while you researched. It was also interesting to read about the types of programs that help people and what they target in the program. This website might help with further research: https://www.drugabuse.gov/publications/principles-drug-addiction-treatment-research-based-guide-third-edition/drug-addiction-treatment-in-united-states/types-treatment-programs.

      • Brooklyn,
        I enjoyed reading your piece because it was very informative. I do not know much about drugs/drug abuse in general but you were able to explain and summarize it in a way that was easy to understand. Although there are programs to help with drug abuse, I think that they are not promoted or emphasized enough in the Unites States. Do you think that these programs for drug abuse are making an impact in America currently? In what ways could they be improved?
        Regards,
        Shenika

    • Hello! I really liked your piece, and how you are bringing awareness to drug abuse. I think drug abuse related deaths are not talked about enough, and I really do not think that enough action has taken place. As you said, the homeless are affected by drug abuse, but they are the one’s who can’t get help for their “problem,” because the sad truth is, is that Rehab is incredibly expensive. Thank you for this informative read!
      Jessica

    • Brooklyn, I agree that this is a very important topic and it is increasing in how common it is in our society today. I do think that more emphasis needs to be put on rehab, but it seems that all the rehab programs you presented are aimed towards keeping children off the drugs. I think more of it could be aimed for adults or teens that have already started and need to be stopped before they seriously hurt themselves or someone else. I also believe there are many other drugs that can lead to death that aren’t thought of in a fatal way like heroin and fentanyl are. Drugs as common as marijuana and alcohol can lead to many deaths not due to the drugs themselves, but because of the impaired decisions people make when affected by them and it can also cause tragedies.

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           I know that there has been issues in the past that is affecting our climate drastically. Rising temperatures in the air and in the ocean is affected by the air pollution and waste/litter that is thrown int

    Why is climate changing so rapidly?

           I know that there has been issues in the past that is affecting our climate drastically. Rising temperatures in the air and in the ocean is affected by the air pollution and waste/litter that is thrown...

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