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Dear Bethzy,
I am touched after ready your poem, “talking to the sun” because it reminded me of how the world used to be when we were young and worry free.
One stentence that really stood out to me was when you said, ” I remember not having to worry about myself” this stood out to me because when we were little we didn’t worry about how we looked, or what we ate or even what other people really though of us, we were just happy children.
Thank you for writing this, I look forward to seeing what you write because I find what you write to be very intresting! -
Dear Bethzy,
I am touched by your poem, “Talking to the sun” because it creates the longing for my childhood once again. It has me miss the times I was a careless child that all I had to worry about was wanting a toy rather than worrying about school, life, money, etc.One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “I remember having it easy as a kid” I think this is so true because now as we grow older life starts adding more to the complications. Rather than believing as a child, I can’t wait to grow up we start longing for what it felt like to be a child again.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because this poem was meaningful and very heartfelt. It’s those moments that you miss of being a child that makes you feel like you never wanna grow up and only go back in time.
Aaliyah
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Bethzy commented on the post, Fonny seems so loyal, he seems to be really in love with her.
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Dear Bethzy:
I am sad after reading your poem, “Talking to the sun” because I am a teenager soon to become an adult. I am not sure if I am prepared for what the future has for me but will have to be ready. And until those days come I want to take advantage of the little moments that count on enjoying and having fun with life.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is, “I remember having it easy as a kid.” It is true because as a high school student I am more independent. I have to get things done at a certain date in order to be successful with my grades.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I know the difference between being a kid, into a teenager, and becoming an adult. I would like you to continue telling about how you got through all that or explaining what is your favorite part about being an adult now.
Saray