Ryan, I thought your poem was terrific. The way it is written makes me feel as if I was right there on the same ride. Nice job.

I really liked this piece. It made me realize, what I think of as a bad day is not nearly as terrible as what other people are going through. I hope to see more pieces like this from you.

I really liked your post. You do not even need the description to get the message out of the picture. Mr. Hentschel is clearly an important person.

You made some solid points in your post. However I think that if adolescents want it that bad, then they will get it no matter how difficult it is for them.

I completely agree with you. I feel as if the police are starting to think of themselves as being above the law. And that the rules do not always apply to them. Everyone should have to abide by the same laws, no matter what their status is.