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  • benv17
  • Okemos, Michigan, USA
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    For sale

    used coat

    many stories

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    For sale used coat many stories

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    so much depends

    upon

     

    a little red

    shovel

     

    coated in dirt

    or snow

     

    Inside the red

    barn.

    The Red Shovel

    so much depends upon   a little red shovel   coated in dirt or snow   Inside the red barn.

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    Too little

    Important

    More needed

    Every second counts

    Time

    Too little Important More needed Every second counts

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    • You never really understand or appreciate the concept of time. We take it for granted and think that tomorrow is guaranteed. You never know when your time is going to run out, so don’t live in the past, learn to let go of things… Live for “now”.

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    A farmer named Bucky

    Lived on a farm in Kentucky

    From crops to animals

    His favorite food was danimals

    Had a best friend named Chucky  

     

     

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    Bucky

    A farmer named Bucky Lived on a farm in Kentucky From crops to animals His favorite food was danimals Had a best friend named Chucky       Image From: Modern Farmer

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    • Dear Ben:

      I am humored by your poem, “Bucky,” because there is a lot of rhyme

      One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you “Lived on a farm in Kentucky”, because I liked the way you wrote it in line with the rest of the poem. I think this is funny because you were making clever jokes when you wrote it. You were also making it funny and witty.
      Another part that I liked is where, “His favorite food was animals”. This stood out for me because it truly made me think of eating danimals as a little girl.

      Your poem reminds me of something that I wrote once. One time I wrote a poem about my best friend. Ironically she also loved danimals and moved to Kentucky. She was very kind and sweet, as well as funny!

      Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because you seem like a talented author with different ideas on how to make people laugh. As well as how to make people happy.

    • This poem made me laugh! Nice job. Very cute!

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