• Dear Isabella:

    I am very impressed by your post, “The many details that make my spread,” because of how clearly you state your ambitions. You’re very direct in your writing and unafraid to talk about your ideas. You’re also very clear in stating why you chose Journalism and what it means to you.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me…[Read more]

  • My name is William Becker, and I am a sophomore at J.H. Rose High School in Greenville, NC. I am Entertainment Co-Editor for our school’s paper, Rampant Lines, and I am a member of my school’s Science Oly

    • Dear William:
      I am impressed with your bio, “Writing, Life, and Me: My Journalist Bio” because of all you have accomplished in high school already and you are only a sophomore. You are juggling so much on your plate already with Boy Scouts and swimming on top of all the school work that comes with high school. One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “I’m not necessarily the best at interviewing and interactions, so I’ve always been a bit more inclined toward these types of writing.” I think this is relate because interviewing and interactions are also things I am not the greatest at. Another sentence I liked was “If I could interview anybody about anything, I would probably interview my grandmother and grandfather on my mom’s side of the family.” This stood out for me because my grandparents are two of my very best friends and sometimes I forget how lucky I am to be able to have the time I’ve had with them. Your bio reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I also decided that I wanted to submit an audition article for Rampant Lines. I also have a lot of the same interests that include film but I am more intrigued by music and the food aspect of entertainment. Opinion is something that I am just learning to write about but following examples like yours will help me learn. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I want to see how much more you will grow as a person and academically throughout the rest of your high school experience. I can tell by your bio that you have a lot of aspirations and are far wiser than your age.

    • Dear William,
      I am very moved by your post, “Writing, Life, and Me: My Journalist Bio,” because getting into Entertainment and Opinion, as a freshmen, is so remarkable! It is really cool that you are interested in film!
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Is there someone else out there who knows about us while we remain oblivious? ” I think this outstanding because it extremely insightful and something I don’t often think about.
      Another sentence that I saw was: “By the time I was born, they were both suffering from dementia, and I sadly never got to hear their stories.” This stood out for me because it is very thoughtful, and shows your charismatic personality.
      Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I had to audition for a show. I know how nerve racking it must be when you’re waiting for your results. It’s just like it is when I am auditioning in front of professional ballerinas.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I know you are extremely passionate about your writing. Your opinion articles are always bomb and so are you.

    • Dear William,
      I am very moved by your post, “Writing, Life, and Me: My Journalist Bio,” because getting into Entertainment and Opinion, as a freshmen, is so remarkable! It is really cool that you are interested in film!
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Is there someone else out there who knows about us while we remain oblivious? ” I think this outstanding because it extremely insightful and something I don’t often think about.
      Another sentence that I saw was: “By the time I was born, they were both suffering from dementia, and I sadly never got to hear their stories.” This stood out for me because it is very thoughtful, and shows your charismatic personality.
      Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I had to audition for a show. I know how nerve racking it must be when you’re waiting for your results. It’s just like it is when I am auditioning in front of professional ballerinas.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I know you are extremely passionate about your writing. Your opinion articles are always bomb and so are you.

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