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Hi Adam! I loved your poem I could really picture myself laying under the stars on a summer night with no worries in the world. I really liked the cover photo it goes perfectly with your poem.

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Date with the Sun View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • May 4, 2017

Hi Ariel! I loved your poem the words were very easy to picture and I love this cover photo it goes along perfectly with your poem.

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Friendship is Key View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • May 4, 2017

Hey Thomas! I really liked your introduction to the start of your essay. It was really unique to hear everyone's different opinions on what they believed in and it was cool to hear all the different voices. I have to agree with you that friendship is the most important...

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Fate View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • May 3, 2017

Hi Abdullah! I agreed with your fate essay. I too believe that fate is not just brought on you, that you have to work to get a dream, and even if you work hard to get what you want things can change. I know what it is like to...

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Where I’m From View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 24, 2017

I love your poem. I loved all the descriptive words you had I could really picture this and I really liked learning about your past. My favorite line was "I am from the missing pew at the back of the church where sunday mornings were spent on the soccer...

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Hugs View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 24, 2017

I really like this piece. It puts hugs into a different perspective. I'm not the type to really hug but reading this makes me rethink it. I loved the ending as well it was very cute.

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love is complicated View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 24, 2017

I think your question is a very good question. Everyone will have different opinions but I personally think the more love the better. I think we should all love as many people as possible. We all need to feel loved.

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Don’t Leaf Me View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 24, 2017

This poem is so cute. I could picture everything you said of the leaf wanting to leave the tree and the tree still being protective. I really enjoyed your idea of a parent to child with a tree and leaf.

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Being Dead View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 11, 2017

Hi Kevin, This book sounds really interesting. I like books that are so intense it is hard to put them down. I too get paranoid that someone is following behind me. Everytime I go to my car at night I run to it and jump into my car because I...

Hello Skylar, I find it interesting that McDonald's, as well as other popular fast food places are starting to make healthier options. I have to agree with you though, on how do we know if they are truly making things all that much healthier. I personally almost never go to...

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Activity routine View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 11, 2017

Hello Juray, I really found it fascinating how you posted about your daily routine. It is interesting to see how others get ready for school in the morning and how their days go. You are definitely not the only one who wakes up at the last possible moment. I don't...

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Leaving The Nest View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 11, 2017

Hi Tala, I loved your poem and how you rhymed at the end of each line in different patterns. I also loved your theme, it really relates to me as I am preparing to go off to college and my mother sounds just like the mom in this poem. She...

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The Good, the Bad Days View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 4, 2017

Hi Rocky, I really enjoyed your poem. I love these style of poems as you get to learn about the author's past. I really liked your last line of "I am from me..," it was a really cool way for you to end it.

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A Story to Be Told View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 4, 2017

Ajonea, I love your poem! It is really unique and I could really picture this girl you were writing about. You've left me now wanting to know what did this girl wrong and what made her so sharp?

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What Effects Confidence? View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • March 4, 2017

Hi Malia, I found this article very interesting as I personally don't have a lot of self confidence. I was bullied at a young age which I believe has affected me greatly. I find it funny how true it is that just wearing materialistic things can make us feel so...

Hi Anna! This is a very interesting topic to me as I have recently started to try to eat healthier. I go to my local tropical smoothie place and have healthy smoothies with kale or spinach, and many different fruits I had never heard of. It is really interesting...

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Double Trouble: a bedtime story View Comment
  • @autumn17
  • February 24, 2017

Aww this story is so cute. I like the fun names, and the difference between the two brothers, on one being sweet and the other being sour. I also like the ending that Mike laughed along with the fact he got pranked instead of getting angry.

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