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    I am Athletic 

    I am athletic

    do not restrain my body

     

    my legs yearn to stretch out in front of me

    my feet beg to catch me as I almost fall

    and my heart thrives when it is overworking

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    I am Athletic  I am athletic do not restrain my body   my legs yearn to stretch out in front of me my feet beg to catch me as I almost fall and my heart thrives when it is overworking          ...

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    • Autumn,
      I relate to this poem. Running is my passion too, and without it, I am less happy and less healthy. When I can’t run, I’m not as good a person as when I do run. Good work sticking to the format! I appreciated this poem.

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    Autumn commented on the post, Where I'm From

    I love your poem. I loved all the descriptive words you had I could really picture this and I really liked learning about your past. My favorite line was “I am from the missing pew at the back of the church where sunday mornings were spent on the soccer field,” it was very strong.

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    Autumn commented on the post, Hugs

    I really like this piece. It puts hugs into a different perspective. I’m not the type to really hug but reading this makes me rethink it. I loved the ending as well it was very cute.

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    I think your question is a very good question. Everyone will have different opinions but I personally think the more love the better. I think we should all love as many people as possible. We all need to feel loved.

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    Autumn commented on the post, Don't Leaf Me

    This poem is so cute. I could picture everything you said of the leaf wanting to leave the tree and the tree still being protective. I really enjoyed your idea of a parent to child with a tree and leaf.

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