This is a serious topic because many people get hurt because of the things they use and do in war. Many lives are taken and young kids die. Not everybody actually believes that war is the right thing to go. W
At first I did not really have a understanding of what Genetic Engineering was but after the watching Introduction to Genetic Engineering I have a better understanding then I had before. I know that many tools ar
This is great I felt exactly the same way. Before i actually researched genetic engineering I had no clue of what it is was,but after researching I had a better understanding. I really like when you said “My gut reaction to watching the videos is that it’s awesome that you can do so many things with the DNA of humans and food anything. Technology is important because many things can come from using different tools and materials”.The video really did open doors in my mind on the idea of genetic cloning being a big part of the future.
We both thought the same when we had to think about what it was. I did not know if it could be possible to do Genetic Engineering. Do you know what they put when they do Genetic Engineering the video help a lot and got a better understanding of Genetic Engineering.
This a good topic and I like how you explained what a newcomer was. Are you just talking about the newcomers only at Fremont? Do you think that only newcomers should get 1 on 1 help? Your solution is good but explain it to us more on how this could actually be changed.
Your argument is very clear and you have a good thesis to start it off. When reading your work I just wanted to know is it all social media that you are talking about or just a certain one? Not only kids use the internet is a negative way because adults also have a negative effect on social media. With your solution can you talk more about…[Read more]
I like the fact that you made a video so people can see how African Americans “Blacks” or just people of color feel about the law enforcement. Everybody had different answers but they connected to each other in a way. This was a good start to the problem! I feel like you should write about how the police fears any other race but their own. Talk…[Read more]
Good start! I think talking about you personal would be good so the readers will get to know why this is so important to you. I like the concept because gang violence in oakland is high in the last year Oakland has lost a lot of young kids taken to young. Do you think your solution could actually stop gang violence completely? From reading the…[Read more]
This is a major issue to be looking and you have a good start to a solution. Women have never been looked at the same as man since forever so why do you think this issue will change? I think that your idea for protesting is good but why protest at the places you said?
I agree with your post, “hook your audience” because I agree with your statment about how lots of students skip school and this is not right. Your vedio was very good and good job hooook in g you your audience.
I agree with you that many kids skip school. I believe that adults should try finding new ways to make students go to school. I think many kids might not go to school because they might have to go to work. They might not want to learn or they might just not care about education. I believe they should get the education that they need because they could get homeschooled or they could try some other way. Without education they would not be able to have a successful career. For me I’d rather go to school so that i could have a better career.
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