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    Ashley commented on the post, Sonrie!

    Dear Veronica:
    I am in agreement with your post, “Sonrie,” because its a theme interesting and real. We need to have this always in mind and to whatever we want. Always smile and never put attention to bad comments.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ with your body and your life you can do what you want.” I think this is realist…Read More

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    So far, the plot in 12 again reminds me of another text. In The Time Machine, is a book where there is a machine that goes to the past but when the people go to the past it just goes to the place they want, and

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    So far, the plot in 12 again reminds me of another text. In The Time Machine, is a book where there is a machine that goes to the past but when the people go to the past it just...

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    • Dear ashley
      I am impressed by your post The time machine because… the post say that people travel to the exact places this is awesome because think in all the places to the what would you go in the past change the past etc… one sentence you wrote that stands out for me is :’’future they just went to the specific place. I think this is impressed because you could at any important date in the time thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because… your posts are very interesting and have a form in that the history it develops.

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    Ashley commented on the post, A Poem of Mexico

    Dear Wendy:
    I feel I am living her poem, “A poem of Mexico,” because Mexico is very gorgeous place. Is a place where you can relax be with were family and live together. And I am in USA and my parents are in Mexico and it is hard living far from them.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “She waits for the day when she’ll go b…Read More

  • Dear Sofia:

    I am excited with your post, “The smallest being in the world but the big in the heart,” because this actions happen a lot. Our parents try to found us a husband or a wife but depending the social class. We need to stop that this is not good for us.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “So far central idea in “ El…Read More

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    So far, the characters in “12 again” reminds me of something I saw. One day when I was with my cousin she was always fighting with her parents. She always discussed with them and wished that she would be 10 aga

    Appreciate It !

    So far, the characters in “12 again” reminds me of something I saw. One day when I was with my cousin she was always fighting with her parents. She always discussed with them and wished that she would be...

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    • Ashley, this sounds like a super interesting book! Isn’t weird how when we’re young, we want to be older and when we’re old, we want to be younger? I also liked your ending line of “appreciating our parents.” That’s really true. I don’t think enough of us show our parents gratitude. This book so far reminds me of the movie “13 Going on 30.” This teen girl becomes a 30 year old woman and has to understand that being old isn’t everything in life. I’d really recommend the movie!

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