• Asa commented on the post, Keep Going 1 month, 1 week ago

    Dear Tania,
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Why did that particular line stand out to you out of all of the other lines? I am glad that you liked my poem and found it motivational.
    Thanks again
    -Asa

  • Asa wrote a new post, Keep Going 2 months, 1 week ago

    When you fall downAnd it is hard to get upKeep goingWhen all hope is lostBut you see a wayKeep goingWhen someone says you can’tBut you know you canKeep goingWhen you’re having a hard timeAnd times aren’t getti

    • Dear Asa, thank you for this cool poem. I like the way you are pushing toward into bad things, and how positive you are. I agree with you, we should keep going even if feel bad.

    • Hi Asa,
      What I really liked about your poem was how you used a bunch of examples of how life can be rough and not easy at times. I also liked how you followed each of those examples with, “Keep going”. They’re two simple little words but they carry a big meaning to them. Overall, great job on this poem!

    • Dear Asa,
      I am amazed by your poem,¨Keep going¨, because you explain to the audience that you should never stop in your journey. To me the main message of your poem is to always keep going because life can and will get better you just need to ¨keep going¨. I know this because of the lines and how they repeat keep going. One line you wrote that stood out to me is,¨When your life is all uphill, And there won’t be downhill for miles, keep going. I like how you used the literary device of Anaphora because it reminds the audience each time to keep going. Your poem sends an important message about motivation because your title says keep going and that is a word of motivation. Thanks for your poem I look forward to seeing more of your work.

      • Dear Tania,
        Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Why did that particular line stand out to you out of all of the other lines? I am glad that you liked my poem and found it motivational.
        Thanks again
        -Asa

    • hi Asa,
      I really like your poem “keep going”, i think it was really good and for the right person this can be really helpful t o keep in mind not to lose hope and it makes me think about how some people have lost hope already. this a really good poem and I believe you can be a poet, good job keep going!
      sincerely, Matthew

  • Asa commented on the post, Hate vs Hate 5 months, 2 weeks ago

    Dear Jessica
    Thank you so much for sharing your poetry. A line that stood out to me was “We need to motivate people To stop this resentment. So love can be present.” because I agree with what you are trying to say. A connection I made to your poem is that the world has a lot of hate right now which is not good. Thank you so much for writing and I…[Read more]

  • Asa commented on the post, My Life Story 5 months, 2 weeks ago

    Dear Kayla,
    Thank you so much for sharing your poetry. A line that stood out to me was “At times I felt y’all weren’t even there for me And you caused me to separate from my other siblings” because I think this line is very emotional and deep. A connection I made to your poem is that I can understand how hard it is to be part of two worlds. Tha…[Read more]

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