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    This is a comic about my niece and I talk about my love for her.

    Meeting Destiny

    This is a comic about my niece and I talk about my love for her.

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    • Dear Arely,
      I enjoyed looking at your comic because I can relate to when I met nephew for the first time. I like how you involved color, to show the happiness you felt. You did a great job! I hope to see more of your work in the future.

    • Dear Arely,
      Thanks for your beautiful comic, I look forward to seeing your next post. I really liked how you you put your feelings in your comic, I can tell how much you love destiny.!

    • Dear Arely,
      Beautiful comic ! I enjoyed reading your comic. I was able to picture the love you have for your niece. I could relate to this feeling. Your last panel is what really stood out to me because it proved how much you love your niece. Good job !

    • Dear Arely,
      I like how you showed us the emotions/feelings you had before and after your niece was born. It helped me a lot in being able to identify how you were feeling about a new baby who is now part of your life. This was a beautiful comic, thank you.

  • Luis,
    I really like your memoir it really shows how who you really are and how you got to this point. The part that really stool out to me is “ I won’t say i’m the best camera person in the car scene but I feel like i’m up there.” This stood out to me because you know your not the best yet but your confident about yourself that you are. I hope to…Read More

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    Arely commented on the post, Choices

    Dear Kris,
    I am amazed about ur comic, choices because it really shows how you started to play soccer. It explains how it changed you on being a bad ass to an athlete.One part of your comic that stands out for me is where you have your graphic weight on your third panel. I think this explains a lot because it shows how nerves you where to hear…Read More

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    Being the only girl with brothers

     

    In my family, I have 3 brothers, and older and two younger.

     

    As the only girl growing up among three brothers, is not easy

    I was always afraid to be left out.

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    Being The Only Girl With Brothers

    Being the only girl with brothers   In my family, I have 3 brothers, and older and two younger.   As the only girl growing up among three brothers, is not easy I was always afraid to be left out. I didn’t...

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    • Dear Arely,
      This was well thought of and written. You expressed yourself with many examples and I’m hella juiced you have continued to write. As I was reading, It felt real because I too am the only girl sibling in my household. Thank you for speaking up on an emotion that many girl siblings feel. Super juiced to see what you have next to post!

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    Yo soy Arely,

    En una sociedad que necesita cambiar

    I am Arely,

    In a society that needs a change

    I live in a immigrant’s household

    I am the only girl out of three boys

    I am a

    My poem

      Yo soy Arely, En una sociedad que necesita cambiar I am Arely, In a society that needs a change I live in a immigrant's household I am the only girl out of three boys I am a CHICANA Education is my struggle but Interacting...

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    • Arely – These lines really stand out to me — “This is why I am proud to be an Oakland Chicana // It took me time to be a proud, // It took me time to love my people, // It took my time to care about myself”. I’m glad you’ve made the journey toward self-care and pride. That’s remarkable! You certainly are a revolutionist! I hope you continue to do more for yourself and the community. You are a strong, powerful young woman.

    • Arely – This line really outstands me – “Living in Oakland has never made me forget about my culture.
      There is a lot of religious places where my culture gets together. The church. The sweat. The mosque. The temple. Having a diverse community helps keep my culture alive and learn different cultures.” This relates to me because I also live in Oakland attend Unity High School and living in oakland doesn’t make a change for me and my religion. I really liked your poem keep writing revolutionist!

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