I am happy with your poem, “Desiring God’’, because you talk about true things that people say and think.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I was always curious about who created the planet earth. What was here before human beings were present.” I think this is interesting because I also want to know about that ques…[Read more]
Some people think that god is real, but other people think the god is not real. Sometimes I think that people don’t believe in god because they have a type of religion that do not let them to believe in that g
This is a pretty important topic as it affects the lives of billions of people across the world. Even though some people have quite different opinions on the matter, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
I am happy about your poem, “ My Sweet Inside Origin’’, because you write about your life and hobbies and like that I can know you better.
“I am from fornite on the PS4’’, I think this is spectacular because I also play fortnite in the PS4 and in my cell phone.
Another sentence that I liked was: “ I am from pictures, fro…[Read more]
I am amazed by your poem, “Arancha’s Where I’ From,” because in this poem you express the type of holidays you like to celebrate and enjoy them, you also tell us about the type of food you like ,the hobbies you have , but not only what you like instead you also write about what you were told not to do.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is : “ I am from the red and white Christmas,” I think this is very delightful because you describe Christmas as a beautiful holiday full of love and joy celebrated with the ones you love.
Another sentence that I loved was: “I am from my dream to go to college, pass all my classes and get my degree.I am from my dream to become a doctor.” This stood out for me because this tells a lot about yourself like you are always positive and it seems like you would become such a successful person by the way you look up to things and your goals.
Your poem reminds me of something that happened to me.One time me and my mom decided to leave our country when I was also 9 years old I didn’t like the idea of leaving some family members and friends, but we had to leave the country because we had some personal problems with one of my mom’s family member, when we arrived in this country I turned 10 we were reunited with our family we started celebrating holidays together but it didn’t feel the same, the food was different and we realized that in this country there are more opportunities than in my native country, now I look up to graduating high school and getting a degree on college to become a doctor and make my mom really proud.
Thanks for your writing.
I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I know the type of content it will have and I’m pretty sure I will like all of them because your poems feel honest and tells a lot about your personality.
My name is Arancha and I was born in Spain. I am 14, almost 15 years old. I have lived in Spain. In school I like to talk with my friends, and when I am out of school I like to use my cell phone or go to the park.
Dear Arancha :
I am curious about your post .“My story,” because when I read your story I felt confident in you. That much better when your life changed. A sentence you wrote that stands out for me is:”He found a job where the boss of that job paid well. ” I think this is great because before when he haven’t a job he was very sad, now he has States searching for more opportunities.
Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. It reminds me that I was so sad when I left Yemen
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.
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