• “like a hook into an eye”, “you fit into me” comes before it and “a fish hook” comes after it. The role this line plays in the poem is that it misleads the reader into thinking that she’s talking about a hoo

  • Anjelina commented on the post, BMX and Cars 3 weeks, 2 days ago

    He Rayce,
    I think your bio is really cool and it shows me a clear representation of who you are as a person and what you like to do. I also appreciate how honest you are about the things you don’t like. It doesn’t seem like you lie about who you are and it also seems that you are very passionate about your hobbies. BMX biking sounds crazy…[Read more]

  • Dear Coleman,
    I think you’re so cool, your poem really tells me alot about you and how productive of a person you are.
    You seem to spend most your time doing really valuable and important things which is a great thing and you should continue to keeping up your good work. I hope to be just like you one day.

  • I really like this piece of work, I also believe that self confidence is important as if you never believed in yourself you wouldn’t have been motivated to do anything in the first place, with the mindset of “I cant”. I appreciate this post as I feel like this could give others support and help when they need it, a good piece of advice along the way.

  • Anjelina wrote a new post, Headspace 2 months ago

    Wonders, MysteryCuriosityWith discoveryOf the great unknownHaving to use our greatest weapons

  • Anjelina wrote a new post, Where Im from 2 months ago

    I am from red ties,From the 1 dollar uniform ritualsEvery morning I am from Jiu Li Song parkThe seniors on allThe exercising machinesWalkingMassagingI am from the rows and rows of treesWith just a few roads in

  • Anjelina wrote a new post, I Remember 2 months ago

    I remember growing up and buying breakfast at the local breakfast standsOn my way to schoolI remember taking the bus in the morningPatiently waiting for me to arrive at my stopI remember buying a red scarf at the

    • Hi Anjelina,
      I thought that this poem was a beautiful way to tell your story. You are a very talented writer, and I hope you keep writing and posting on here. I look forward to reading more of your writing!

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