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  • Oaklad, California, USA
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    Why do we fall in love?

    Man meets woman

    Woman meets woman

    Man meets Man

     

    Simple love, but is it long lasting Love?

     

    But why do we fall for one another,

    experiment with one another,

    Why I'm Emotional As Hell

    Why do we fall in love? Man meets woman Woman meets woman Man meets Man   Simple love, but is it long lasting Love?   But why do we fall for one another, experiment with one another, create a growing passion for one another? And in...

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    • Dear Angie, I am shocked by your poem, “Why I’m Emotional As Hell,” because you made it rhyme so well. I can almost hear Tupac read it in his tone of voice. One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you start question loving each other but we still hurt each other. I think this is powerful because these two things are juxtapositions but you made them go so well together. Another part that I really liked is where you start saying how we should be helping each other grow. This stood out for me because I agree with you, we should be helping each other. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because I’m sure you speak from your heart!

    • Angie, I absolutely love your poem. It seems very personal to you. I think it’s awesome that you shared it on youthvoices. I always love reading poetry and I have to say yours is one of my favorites that I’ve read on youthvoices so far! I think it’s interesting you connected love with your emotions. I hope you continue to write poetry. Thanks again for sharing this!

    • Dear Angus,
      Logic better ask you to be in his new songs. I love how in your pom you question thyself and one another. Your poem had meaning, one that we can all relate to. Thank you for making us think about the hate and love that we see everyday and make us question why it happens. This poem was beautiful to read!

    • Angie, I really loved your poem. I can tell it came from the heart and it was very well written. The entire poem flows very well and I really enjoyed reading through it. I look forward to read what you write next.

    • Angie, I raly enjoyed your poem. I think it is very hard to be very introspsective on your life and feelings and publish it for people to read. You put a lot of time and effort and the rhyme scheme is very impressive. Personally I like the realness your poem presents. I think the thought of why we do things for love and why we continue to be hurtful when In reality we are hurting ourselves is truthful. I also like your idea of growing form one another. Great job and keep writing.

    • Dear Angie, I really like your poem. It was well written and shows that you really put work into it.One part that I really liked is where you start saying how we should be helping each other grow. This stood out for me because I agree with you, we should be helping each other. I look forward to reading more stuff from you.

    • Angie—
      This is a very spectacular piece of poetry. It examines many of the baffling, important questions that have puzzled human beings for centuries. I like the and tone and feel of your poem. Its rhythm slides off the tongue like a small taxi off the busy cobbled streets of Milan on a breezy Summer’s day. You provided a provocative, yet demure word choice and it all came together to create a wonderful piece of art.

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    My full name is Angie Cassandra Cedillo the Significance to my first name was given to me by my aunt and mother. My mother’s story behind naming me is giving me her nickname as Angie. She gave me this nickname

    Angie C. Cedillo in 2018

    My full name is Angie Cassandra Cedillo the Significance to my first name was given to me by my aunt and mother. My mother's story behind naming me is giving me her nickname as Angie. She gave me this...

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    • I like how you wrote this and it seems interesting to me that when you were growing up you didn’t like your name so much until you grew into it and that when I was growing up I liked my name a lot and when I found out I had a step brother I started to hate my name. Good Job!

    • Your story is very interesting Angie! I love how your name was chosen by your mother instead of your father. The story you decided to tell was structured in a proper way. Especially when you recognised how much a name matters to a person.

    • Dear Angie,

      I really enjoyed reading about your name and the meaning behind it. A line that I enjoyed reading was “My full name is Angie Cassandra Cedillo the Significance to my first name was given to me by my aunt and mother.” It’s cool that you know who gave your name. Another line that I enjoyed reading was “I grew into my name and I now know that there are very few people with the name Angie and if there is, it is usually a nickname and short for a longer name like Angelica or Angelique.” I enjoyed reading that line because I also have a nickname but I only get called at my house with my family. I can’t wait to read what you write in the future.

      -Jared

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