• Thank you for commenting. If I had the choice to stop world war 2 I would because even though today’s society benefits from the cures and treatments found from testing, many innocent people and children suffered their whole lives just to find those cures and treatments.

  • World War 2 occurred from 1939 to 1945, between those 6 years there were many technical discoveries that got introduced in our civil lives. To name a few, aviation and RADAR were developed, computers, medicine and

    • Thanks For Sharing! This is very helpful.

    • Very interesting post. Nice Work.

    • Dear Angel,
      Your post “Was world war 2 helpful ?” stood out to me because I find it interesting how no one really discusses whether or not the war was helpful. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is,” Just after the United States entered WWII. hundreds of women were employed around the country as computers. Their job consisted of using mechanical desk calculators to solve long list of equations.” I think this is interesting because the war is supposed to be affecting people but it actually helped with technology.Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what write next, because you have very interesting points.
      Sincerely,
      Grady

    • Dear Angel;
      I am really surprised with your post. Your post includes great background about why World War 2 and how did that impact how we live now and what doctors know. I am surprised with your entire post because I was able to learn a lot. Thank You for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.
      Guadalupe

    • Dear Angel,

      You make a very valid claim here that the WWII helped advance the technology and medicine we have available today. But do you think it was for it for all those lives that suffered in result of those experiments. If you could choose, would you stop WWII even though it was so beneficial? Thank you for your post, it was very educational.

      • Thank you for commenting. If I had the choice to stop world war 2 I would because even though today’s society benefits from the cures and treatments found from testing, many innocent people and children suffered their whole lives just to find those cures and treatments.

  • Dear Aida,
    I am interested by your post, “Why I am Mysterious as Hell”, because you wrote it like it was a poem and you talk about personal feelings. One sentence you wrote that stood out to me was: “Many people think they have figured me out. I shake my head.” I think this is an interesting sentence because you talk about different views of how…[Read more]

  • Dear Yadira,

    I am interested by your post, “It describes me but doesn’t finalize,” because you talk about what your name means to you and what it means to other people. One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is: “I want to be called whatever you want to call me.” I think this is confusing to me because a lot of people who get called out of…[Read more]

  • Dear Eli,
    I am interested about your post, “Oakland is Diverse”, because you talked about what brings Oakland together. I also liked how you talked specifically about 3 things that brings different communities together in Oakland. On esentance you wrote that stands out to me is: “To maintain a positive, diverse city it is important to conti…[Read more]

  • Angel Noriega

    English

    Ms. Portugal

    January 12, 2018

    OUSD Budget Cut

     

    “The Oakland Unified School District’s Board of Education passes a multimillion-dollar midyear budget cut.” (NBC Bay Area). OUSD is alr

    • Dear Angel,
      This 9$ Million Dollar Budget cut affects all schools in the OUSD district because all schools in the district in a whole will lack materials, and maybe will be less efficient at educating students.

    • Dear Angel
      I’m very impressed by you level of work. Your blog called “$9 MILLION DOLLAR BUDGET CUT FROM THE OUSD” was a really good blog and you really explained everything that is going on. It shows that you did a lot of good research and that you know what you’re talking talking about and how much you care about oakland. One sentence that sticked out to me was the one that said “They might say students aren’t using supplies correctly or teachers were spending too much on unnecessary products and that’s the reason there’s a cut. But, I would say, even if those scenarios were true, I strongly believe cutting $9 million dollars from OUSD will be a solution, it makes people suffer more than it helps.” Well this is true and you’re right. I really liked your blog and I want to continue seeing your writing. Thank you for taking your time and writing.

  • PROLOGUE

    This story takes place in Oakland,

    A strong rivalry

    Where two sides, gangs, both feel more powerful than the other

    Neither side is afraid to prove that

    Violence is strong in this rivalry

    A

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    Dear Mario,
    Your box is really interesting to me because I can relate to most of the objects in your box. I also think that this box also clearly represents you because they’re all things you like and are interested in. One thing I like about your box is that you have a picture of yourself in it because I only seen a couple of people with…[Read more]

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    I am interested about your letter, “Charlottesville Riot”, because this story was all over the news. I wonder how the people in Charlottesville feel about the riots and violence. I also wonder what was going through the rioters minds when they were protesting.

  • Angel commented on the post, Charlottesville Riot 1 year ago

    I am interested about your letter, “Charlottesville Riot” because I seen a lot of stories about the riots on the news. How long do you think the riots are going to last? Do you think there are going to be more rioters or the riots are going to go away? Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because if I like this writing,…[Read more]

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