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To begin, the novel Fahrenheit 451 connects to 2017 because people consent to those in power. In Fahrenheit 451 there are many examples of the lower class or working class obeying the first class or the people of
Read MoreTo begin, the novel Fahrenheit 451 connects to 2017 because people consent to those in power. In Fahrenheit 451 there are many examples of the lower class or working class obeying the first class or the people of power just...
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Angel commented on the post, Drug Abuse in Oakland
Dear Luna,
Thank you for reading and quoting my with such precision, I would like to know if you noticed any flaws or slip ups in my writing and could make me aware of it, it would be greatly appreciated of you. I would like to write about more of these types of subjects but dont know what I could write about, have any topics that I could write about? -
Angel commented on the post, Drug Abuse in Oakland
Dear Alexander,
I love your kind words and comments to my post were very amusing to read but id like to know into more depth on what you liked about the post. I would love to receive some creative criticism from you as well if that’s not too much to ask. Do you have any similar writings on this subject? if so would you mind giving some help on…Read More -
Valeria, You have very good analysis of your sources and express your opinion very clearly in your writing. I notice that you have a good statistic in the beginning to catch the attention of the reader but I would’ve liked to see you write more in depth about the statistics as well. All in all a very well worded argument but one thing to look in…Read More
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Angel commented on the post, Others and Glorification in Oakland Can Influence Teens to Do Drugs.
What is this all about? I haven’t read it I just want a short summary
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Angel,
Thank you so much for your post and your connections between the novel and your world today. You made many interesting points around government, laws, and biases. However, I am a bit lost in your argument when you begin to introduce your evidence. Where does the evidence end? Though confusing, I do appreciate your argument around the power of consent. In many ways I feel this overpowers coercion because it is the masses, and if the masses questioned better possibly those in power would be “checked” by the people.
Thank you again and I look forward to reading future posts.