I am impressed that you wrote this in January when not many people knew about the virus. People traveling has been a huge reason for the spread like you predicted. Luckily a vaccine has been created that will slow the pandemic.

I think you make good points about how because 16-year-olds can drive and work they should be able to vote. Although many 16-year-olds are mature enough to vote I think that most don’t know much about politics and need more time to learn. I think too many would just vote for who their parents are or vote for someone they know nothing about.

I agree with you about what it means to be American. I like how you wrote about how Americans are divided right now and used current examples to support your claims.

I like how you didn’t tell us it was a dream so when you realized it was a dream in the story we also were surprised. It makes me think about how everything I say can have an impact.