• This place seems pretty calm and serene and I can see why you like it! Places like these are nice to hang around in.

  • – use single quotation marks when there’s a quote within a quote.
    – there should be their

  • In the tender poem “She Walks in Beauty”, the author, Lord Byron expresses his love for this lady through his captivating words overflowing with admiration and adoration for this lovely lady. Lord Byron was a cha

  • My first impression of Byron’s poem was that it had a very sweet and calm tone to it and that it’s is about love which was very pleasant to read about.  It makes me feel delighted and fascinated. A line that

  • Dear Keeba :
    I am mesmerised with your writing from your post, “Questions about Baca’s poem,” because i like the topic and how interesting your questions are.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “This line makes me question why these things would exist in such a ‘perfect, new world’?” I think this is a very good provocative q…[Read more]

  • Anaee and Profile picture of MariamMariam are now friends 2 months, 3 weeks ago

  • In the 1st line of the first stanza, Byron starts off his poem by repeating his title and then uses figurative language (simile) and says “like the night”.  He writes, “She walks in beauty, like the night”

    • Dear Anaee,
      I am Surprised about,on the way you described the poem “She Walks in Beauty,” because to start off for a male to write about women it’s always more of a love affection,not trying to compare their emotions,that no matter that the beauty is inside and out One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “why he uses light and dark to talk about this lady but it does raise another question. How is one able to write about love? ” I think this is a mysterious question because to describe the love he gots its hard to do Another sentence that I got me thinking was: “That comparing this lady to two opposite things just means that there’s beauty in everything and that he thinks that in the same way, there’s beauty in everything about her. This stood out to me because the way that this men not only did he describes the good parts about this lady but also the bad parts that has beauty has this lady is the inside could be beautiful too.Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because i got see the your analysing goes deep into the poem like to background information has well.

  • Anaee wrote a new post, Heyo! 3 months, 2 weeks ago

    My name is Anaee and I am 15 years old about to turn 16. I was born in Ecuador but came to the states when I was only few months old. I don’t really know what else to answer because I am not very aware of who

    • Dear Anaee:
      I am amazed by your post, “Heyo!,” because of the fact that I can see myself in your writing.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I do know I like music a lot and I’m very open to listen to all types of music” I think this is relatable because I as well listen to all types of music and I will will listen to just about anything.
      Another sentence that I liked was: “something I like doing and that is the trip home. I find it relaxing to look around my surroundings even if i dislike the rush of the city.” This stood out for me because I feel like when you’re on the train, listening to music, time sort of loses its essence and you get lost in your own world and thoughts.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I can sort of see myself reflected in your posts.

  • Dear Naiara
    I am moved by your post , “My Immigration Story and Injustice Back in Peru”, because you were very honest about your thoughts and feelings and what you went through before and after you had your big move. I enjoyed reading about how you struggle to memorizing things because I also am the same and I also take notes so I can remember thi…[Read more]

  • Dear Naomi,
    I am so moved by your poem because I also struggle with speaking up for myself and then seeing you here talk about the same makes me feel heartened knowing that others go through the same thing and that they also are looking to improve themselves. There are many times I always get upset with myself for this reason and i’m sure you do…[Read more]

  • I’m from the sound of children going to school at 6 in the morning

    I’m from the delicious smell of ceviche with plantain chips

    I’m from the tienda my grandma owns in order

    To make enough money to help

  • Anaee wrote a new post, Parents 5 months ago

    I wish we had the time,To give hugs,To give love Don’t you remember,The moments You said you’dStay, be there for meNow I find comfort in Other things.Other peopleThat will never be you.

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