• America commented on the post, Open Your Eyes 2 weeks, 5 days ago

    I like the art where you say open your eyes because it gives the reader to see what they are going to see. I think your poem might be better if you try to use similes and metaphors to make your poem better. But I like your poem its looks good.

  • Thank you Alex! I really appreciate you for commenting on my blog this will help me a lot to become a better writer. I wondering if you have any ideas on what I could add to my blog?

  • I really like what you wrote about because people think that is ok to throw trash in the streets but it’s not they don’t realize how they are damaging the community

  • I really like what you wrote about because lot of kids don’t eat at school because of the school food and it really affects students because students need food to be able to focus at school but food they like because if there is no food that they like they won’t eat.

  • ”More than 15 million children witness domestic violence each year in the United States; (Journal of Family Psychology)”. As Journal of Family Psychology stated, 15 million children in the United States have wit

    • Dear America,
      I am impacted by your essay, “Family Violence Affects Youth” because you included actual statistics of people being affected. You inserted citations and a reference page which was very good. I also liked how you brought up the problem of kids not being focused in school. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Because of this many children would feel that the fights were their own fault.” I think this is powerful because this is most often the true case of what goes on in a child’s mind when they see violence.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because you had good explanations of your quotes. As well as adding in your own knowledge.
      -Alexis

      • Thank you Alex! I really appreciate you for commenting on my blog this will help me a lot to become a better writer. I wondering if you have any ideas on what I could add to my blog?

    • Flor replied 1 week ago

      Dear America,
      Your essay makes an important point about children who are suffering with family violence and how they can reach out to ask for help. I appreciate you writing about such an important topic and keep on writing.

    • Hello America,
      I appreciate you writing about this topic especially on how domestic violence can affect children. It is sad to think that more than 15 million children witness domestic violence each year in the United States. I feel that when the topic of domestic violence is spoken about it is only focused on how it affects the victim and not those around them (children). I really liked how you added ways that can help children such as counseling.
      -Aileen

  • America commented on the post, Why Me? 4 months, 1 week ago

    I really like your poem i could tell that it came down deep inside you. People could relate to this because i feel like people have been through that. Nice job i really liked your poem.

  • I wrote theses poems because it connects to Romeo and Juliet’s love story. But also my personal life story.

    Love Is not all

    Love is not all it is not meant nor drink

    Nor slumber nor a roof against the

  • America commented on the post, This is me 6 months, 2 weeks ago

    Dear kalani
    I love how even you are a sister, a daughter and so many other stuff you really work hard for your education. I really like how you don’t pay attention to dominant narrative and you keep doing you. Keep up with the hard work you have done and don’t let negative things put you down.

  • America commented on the post, SHADOW BOX 6 months, 2 weeks ago

    Dear jennifer
    I love how shadow boxes are very special to you and it help you prove proof people wrong.Also, I like how you have thing inside your box from people that empire you. I also, like shadow boxes like you do for similar reasons. – America Diaz

  • This Shadow Box represents my three different identities. I choose to be female, student and a young sister. Many people assume that I’m a bad person or I’m in a gang because most of the time I’m wearing red on my

  • America became a registered member 7 months, 3 weeks ago