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Kinda My Thing View Comment
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  • April 12, 2019

Holley, I really enjoyed reading a little bit about you. As someone who was never allowed to get a pet, I am fascinated by all the pets you own. Some of them are so unique and interesting, I have never known anyone who owns a madagascar hissing cockroach. I...

Hailey, Wow, this is such an interesting topic. I find it very upsetting that some people view athletes as not being intelligent, as I believe that most sports require a lot of work and intelligent training in order for someone to be successful. Also, all successful athletes have a...

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Jugar para sobrevivir. View Comment
  • @Amanij01
  • April 8, 2019

Samantha, I think you make a great connection between the Hunger Games and the real world. The Hunger Games is one of my favorite dystopian novels and I agree with you that there are many aspects of it that we see in our world, such as people fighting for food...

Gwen, I really enjoyed reading this short essay about the different treatments for phobias. I didn't even know about scented nap therapy before, how interesting! I thought it was great that you not only stated and explained the different treatments, but listed some of the advantages and disadvantages of...

Stephen, Wow, this is a great poem! Not only is it well written and structured, but it is something that many teenagers can relate to. Your description of how you feel going to school everyday is something that many of us feel. I appreciate your honestly in your poem....

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Competition in sports View Comment
  • @Amanij01
  • April 4, 2019

Hailey, as a competitive athlete this is a very interesting topic for me to read about. I like how you mentioned that, although competition may seem like a negative thing, sometimes it is important in a team and a motivation for some. Here is a link to an overview...

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1984: Censored Existence View Comment
  • @Amanij01
  • March 28, 2019

Diego, I like your take on 1984. Although I don’t think killing everyone is the best answer, I think it would be a good idea to remove the proles and allow them to live in a society that is similar to one today, where they have more free will. There...

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Dangers of Underage Drinking View Comment
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  • February 26, 2019

Enzo, you make a very compelling argument. I liked how you started off with talking about how underage drinking is dangerous and stating facts that you found related to that. Then, you talked about what you think should be done about it: educate youth about these dangers. I think...

Evelyn, I really enjoyed reading your argumentative essay. I think you brought up some great points about how cyber bullying is a real issue today and how it can affect a large spectrum of people. I think it is also important to keep in mind that not all online...

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The Value of Hard Work View Comment
  • @Amanij01
  • December 5, 2018

Emily, I very much enjoyed reading this. I think you structured your essay very well. I like how you began by talking in general about American values, then you went on to summarize the book "Breakaway", and then in the end relate it to others, all the while maintaining the...

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Based on Race View Comment
  • @Amanij01
  • October 29, 2018

Kelsey, I really enjoyed reading this. Your idea is great and so are your arguments. My favorite part of this essay is when you said, “diversity isn’t just having a lot of different people in one place but also having these different people interact with one another.” This is a...

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Questioning the Death Penalty View Comment
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  • October 29, 2018

Matt, Your arguments are solid and you gave credible resources, however I think you could have organized your ideas and evidence in way that is easier to read. This is a very interesting topic and I am curious to know what stance you hold after doing research. Here is an...

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Blind photographers View Comment
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  • October 24, 2018

Li, this piece is wonderful! I love the topic and I love what you said. Blind photographers are not people one would normally think of on the daily; I didn’t even know there were such types of photographers. However, I learned a lot, like how blind people can feel...

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Our Voices Matter View Comment
  • @Amanij01
  • October 24, 2018

Anna, I really enjoying reading your piece about gun violence and gun control. I like how you brought up a new side to the “is this unconstitutional?” debate, because while many argue that banning guns goes against the second amendment, we are also supposed to have the “right to live...

Li, this is a very interesting and thought provoking essay. I enjoyed reading it and I loved how you used different points of argument to strength your writing. For example, you talked about how app designers try to make their games as addictive as possible, and not only do...

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Policing Immigration View Comment
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  • September 25, 2018

This is a very interesting outlook and argument regarding policing immigration, Gwen. I find your arguments about how immigrants' fear of deportation can affect the rest of the community, not only the immigrants directly. It is also interesting that you wrote about how what the police officers are doing...

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