Wow this is powerful. I’m speechless right now. This must have been painful to write so I am impressed with your strength to write something so deep and meaningful. Very well done!

Nikki, this is a good poem. I go to a catholic school so I know about lent and how hard it is so give something up for that long. This is great, good work!

Sam, this is super interesting and I had no clue that all of those reason you listed are why mars is being looked at for a new home. I can tell you are passionate about this subject and you did a good job of describing what research you did. Good job.

This topic is extremely sad, but I think is important to learn about such awful things that happened so that we can learn from our mistakes. I have no read the book but I want to and I hope you enjoy reading it.

Anna, this is so interesting! This is also such an issue that we have to make sure we do something about. I can’t wait to read more about this and see what you thesis turns into. Great job!

Talmadge, this is a well written analysis of your research and I can tell you are looking at the subject matter extensively. Just from a personal standpoint, my brother has a mind case of ADHD and he takes medication, a low dosage. His grades have gone up but obviously there’s no way to prove there’s a direct correlation. Maybe in the future of…[Read more]

Louis, I completely agree that he is a direct threat to our Earth. You made a lot of well evidence-based arguements that made your post very strong. Although this is a scary topic, you did a good job at presenting it to raise attention and not to stir the pot. Good work!

I think that you understand the path your paper is heading in and what it is going to take to get you there. You know how to write a research paper and it’s good that you are questioning your thesis because that means that you genuinely care about this paper and this topic. I think that whatever route you choose to take concerning the issues or…[Read more]

Jenessa, I have not read this book, but I definitely want to now. I can see how this book is super relatable for someone in high school and not quiet sure where they fit in. I think your summary and analysis of this book was well written. It was short and to the point, very well done!

Ian, this is very well written and extremely powerful. I also live in a very conservative state that wants or wanted to pass the same bill, which I think is 100% unconstitutional. Everyone has the right to feel comfortable with themselves and the fact that some people deny that right just because they are different really makes me sad and scared.…[Read more]

I think is a good start to what I assume will be an essay revolving around that thesis. I think that you are going to be able to find more than enough evidence on the subject to help defend that thesis. I think a really good step to make in this essay would to talk about history and what progress has or hasn’t been made. I would bring in Supreme…[Read more]

Your argument is extremely valid, and bring to mind some very hard truths. I also was devastated to see Trump win, as he is most definitely the wrong person to hold this position. It saddens me to know that the progress we made with Obama is most likely going to be destroyed. So many people are completely scared for their lives and futures and…[Read more]

I completely agree! Not only would she be the first woman to hold the position of president, she would be the first African American woman to do so. Not only is she extremely qualified for this job, but she already has second hand experience as the commander in chief. She is such a strong, loving, and independent woman who make an excellent…[Read more]

I completely agree! I think that Americans don’t understand the struggle that people face when they flea for their lives to come to America. We live these lives that might be difficult, but we aren’t being persecuted for being ourselves. I think it would be so amazing if we could step into the shoes of refugees and immigrants and try to understand…[Read more]

I like this a lot and I think it has a very good message. Immigration is a very large topic today, and is hotly contended. But I believe that there are still good people out there that bring others that aren’t familiar with the area into their embrace. Something very important is to keep he foundation of what you believe, no matter where you go. I…[Read more]

I like this a lot. I think it is a very well written and focused pieced. I think that you did a lot of research and I can tell by all the evidence you brought up. Good job!