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Alli commented on the post, Carpe Diem Poem
I love the urgency of this poem! It has a great message that rings true to all. Awesome writing.
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Alli commented on the post, Thank you, Theatre
Holden, this is such a sweet poem. I love how sentimental and heart warming it is.
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Alli wrote a new post
so much depends
upon
these boots
the soul’s
worn down
the laces
frayed
kicked to the
side
thrown in the
garage
yet used
everyday
Read Moreso much depends upon these boots the soul's worn down the laces frayed kicked to the side thrown in the garage yet used everyday
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We’ve been walking on this path for what feels like forever.
Oh for god’s sake,
my feet are starting to ache.
Don’t tell me to stop complaining please,
I just don’t understand how you’re walking with such ease
Read MoreWe’ve been walking on this path for what feels like forever. Oh for god’s sake, my feet are starting to ache. Don’t tell me to stop complaining please, I just don’t understand how you’re walking with such ease. It’s starting to get dark, Did...
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Alli commented on the post, She Remembers
Your poem is lovely. I can really feel your emotion behind it when I read it. I cannot directly relate to it, but certain ideas of it are very relatable. Overall awesome job.
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I love this poem! It’s so good! I love how you describe how crappy these boots are, yet you still love them