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  • Alli55221
  • Okemos, Michigan, USA
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    Alli commented on the post, Carpe Diem Poem

    I love the urgency of this poem! It has a great message that rings true to all. Awesome writing.

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    Alli commented on the post, Thank you, Theatre

    Holden, this is such a sweet poem. I love how sentimental and heart warming it is.

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    Alli wrote a new post

    so much depends

    upon

     

    these boots

     

    the soul’s

    worn down

     

    the laces

    frayed

     

    kicked to the

    side

     

    thrown in the

    garage

     

    yet used

    everyday

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    so much depends upon   these boots   the soul's worn down   the laces frayed   kicked to the side   thrown in the garage   yet used everyday

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    • I love this poem! It’s so good! I love how you describe how crappy these boots are, yet you still love them

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    We’ve been walking on this path for what feels like forever.

    Oh for god’s sake,

    my feet are starting to ache.

    Don’t tell me to stop complaining please,

    I just don’t understand how you’re walking with such ease

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    We’ve been walking on this path for what feels like forever. Oh for god’s sake, my feet are starting to ache. Don’t tell me to stop complaining please, I just don’t understand how you’re walking with such ease. It’s starting to get dark, Did...

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    Alli commented on the post, She Remembers

    Your poem is lovely. I can really feel your emotion behind it when I read it. I cannot directly relate to it, but certain ideas of it are very relatable. Overall awesome job.

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    Alli commented on the post, Dear You

    Great poem! I think many teenagers can relate. It reminded me of the movie Ten Things I Hate About You.

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    Alli commented on the post, Mom

    This is such a lovely poem. I right away thought of my own mother and could relate to it very well. Reading this reminded me of just how thankful I am to have such a wonderful person in my life like my mother.

  • Hi! I really enjoyed reading your post because I learned a lot and you enlightened me on multiple issues. Many people in society, including myself, are blind to the issues that these kids face. I think it’s up to everyone to work together to bring to light these issues so all these kids have a better childhood and place to grow up. Great piece.

  • Your poem is extremely powerful. I am hopeful that in the future we will have a president that is a relatable figure for all, but currently we are so far from that. It’s sad that we have a president that threatens all the freedoms we have worked so hard for. Great writing.

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    Alli commented on the post, Rave Poem

    Hi Holden! I really like this poem. It has great imagery! It reminds me when I saw Louis the Child, have you ever heard of them?

  • I love the message that you’re trying to get out. You’re very well spoken. I agree that all teens no matter their gender need to feel safe, and I believe it is very unfortunate that our president does not support that idea. Keep speaking up for what you believe in. Great work.

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    I agree with the comment above, the more love the better! I don’t think there is any right or wrong person to love. If you love someone, you love them. It’s that simple.

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  • Hi! Awesome poem. It was really deep and I could feel the emotion you put into it when you wrote it. I think a lot of people can relate to it in numerous ways. Great job.

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    Alli commented on the post, My Body

    Hi Janyah,

    I think your writing really hits home with a lot of people and every girl can relate in some way, shape, or form. I think society is toxic when it comes to body image, and parents don’t do much to help when they raise their sons either. Great piece!

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    Alli commented on the post, Warm Feelings~

    Hi Thaarini,

    I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Based on this poem, it seems like you are an amazing writer. Your use of imagery was fantastic and I could relate to every line you wrote. I also like the ending of your story where you state the word nostalgia as the feeling you were describing, and I too agree that nostalgia is such a warm sounding…Read More

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