• Dear Luyao

    I am happy about how you wrote your poem, “two poems for beautiful beach,” because i like how u said like a u are the bird flying in the sky.

    One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you says i feel like a free bird, but where is my home. I think this is awesome because… it show’s that birds fly where they want to an…[Read more]

  • i liked how u put yourself in a object describes it how they feel over there.

  • My question is, will the world get destroyed? What I have learned in my religion about the world is that the world is going to end. Everything is going to get destroyed. All the people who are living at that time

    • This post really confuses me because at first I was wondering why this was so short? This is pretty much your own opinion. I do also wonder when the world is gong to end. I read somewhere that the world is going to end September twenty-third. Although this may not be true, one still has to take precautions on this issue. I really don’t worry about when the world is going to end. I just live life to the fullest and have no regrets at the end of the day.

    • lukas replied 2 years ago

      Dear Aliyabanu,
      Honestly I’m not satisfied with your post because it is way to short and not very well planned out or thought of. Another reason I’m not impressed is that you didn’t even put in facts about this situation. Also, this is your opinion , when I came on here I expected to hear hard core facts and studies. So I kindly ask if you can next time make your articles or post longer and more scientific. Thank you and thanks for taking the time to read this

  • Location : BROOKLYN BRIDGE.

     

                                  The brooklyn bridge.

          There are two girls walking on the bridge. They are enjoying and having fun and taking pictures. Than one girl says

    • this is a very nice story and interesting i really like but it should get more information then it would become more interesting.

    • Dear, Aliyabanu I like that you took such a great well known bridge/ artifact and had a story line behind it. it was really interesting that you used imagery, because when I look at the picture I wouldn’t have guessed what they were saying.

  • The poem “Where I’m from” by George Ella Lyon makes feel like she went through a lot of hardship. She got pictures of her family that she couldn’t remember the faces of them. The benefit writing poems is to e

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