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I Remember……

I remember How little I was I remember the white girl phase those good old days (i wanted to be white) I remember asking my mother for a sister but got a brother instead  I remember thinking I could fly high in the sky  I remember all the stories I used to read  I remember my closest friends becoming strangers […]

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I Am From Brooklyn and Haiti

I am from two-sided sinks, from Roku Tv’s and domestic eventual, endless sickening, I am from the dirty playground with shattered glass on the ground I am from gunshots ringing out late at night with  the sounds of the police sirens close behind I’m from oxtail stews with plantain  from the spicy smell of Jamaican curry  I’m from Antionette from a […]

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A Place Like Haiti

With its luxurious Mountains, its oceans that’s 620 mi long.It’s voodoo king and Queen papa legba, Marie LaveauIt’s tasteful spicy food And it’s velvety fleshed and honeyed mangoes. Haiti where it’s beautifully tragic With its large population of orphaned children   It’s high crime rate that’s political unstable It’s revival of gang violence.  It’s vulnerability to natural disasters And it’s disappointing use of force by police […]

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Connote of the poem

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.The connote of the poem was Deep. I say this because the writer use specific words to make you visualize what she or he wants you to see. Print Authors Alexis

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rhythm of the poem

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.The rhythm of the poem made me feel deep sorrow for the character. The words the person used in the poem made me visualize what was it like for her. Print Authors Alexis

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Mood of the poem

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.The mood of the poem was very Tense and concerning.I say this because throughout the story the daughter was feeling frustrated because she couldn’t live her life like the other kids. Print Authors Alexis

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Feeling ambitious??

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.She really wants to see whatever’s in the back yard. Print Authors Alexis

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Mother is to overprotective??

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.She wants to meet other kids and have fun but her other doesn’t allow her she thinks everyone else kids is Bad. The mother is overprotective to where she doesn’t even allow her kid to talk to other kids. Print Authors Alexis

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Feeling locked in or cornered??

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.She wants freedom and space form her old life. She feels the need to go out and Explorer,meet other kids and have fun. Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.I think they are talking About her being raped 🤷🏿‍♀️ Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.I think he was scared of the popo and what they gonna do to him Print Authors Alexis

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I still think he was acting too soft but I agree it was unfair to go though what he had to go though

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.I think she ran off on her own to think about some stuff Print Authors Alexis

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observation

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.she shows more of her confidence at the end of the story more then any other part of it. Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Is she working while pregnant?? why?? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.what did he do to get arrested?? how long is he gonna be there?? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Why is he so scared are people after him?? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Did something really bad happen to him to make him act/be this soft?? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Did she fun away or did someone take her??? Where is she? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.why she so mad?? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.why did he run away from her?? did he think that made the problem easier to face?? Print Authors Alexis

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I agree they finally noticed reality

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Why they want a baby?? Print Authors Alexis

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i agree you can't change what's ready been done

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true she really can't do it

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What is she really talking about?? also when she says “it's delicious” is really weird to me

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i agree but i wounder when did it first start??

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Why couldn’t they like everyone???why is that so bad?? Print Authors Alexis

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Even though he shows it in a rude way he really cares about his son and he wants him back.

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Even though he shows it in a rude way he really cares about his son and he wants him back.

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I agree

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.i thought he would be mad about it Print Authors Alexis

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I agree

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.i thought he would be mad about it Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.why is she so mad?? Print Authors Alexis

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agree

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.True that’s Deep love 🙂 Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.So who’s fault is it?? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Is he happy or mad at her???i don’t get it Print Authors Alexis

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i agree

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.it doesn’t matter how he looks Tish still loves him Print Authors Alexis

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questions

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Where’s the colored people at?? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.what’s in the bottle and why did she have it for so long?? Print Authors Alexis

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the boys didn't really need as much education as the girls so they dropped out of school and went to work

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like

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.i love how the Author is very detailed about whatever he talks about. Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.what happened to Ernestine that she changed so much??? Print Authors Alexis

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i agree she pays a lot of attention to people's appearance

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.why does he need so much wood??? Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.what happened to them that they need a lawyer?? Print Authors Alexis

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i agree with you his parents relationship was abusive and disgusting.

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opinion

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.i think this means to not think to much about the next day and focus on today. Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Why is he describing his mother so deeply?? it makes him sound nice and mean at the same time!! Print Authors Alexis

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agree

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.i agree with you he doesn’t really sound proud to know a person that is both black and white. Print Authors Alexis

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Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.Why was he so scared and nervous when around her?? Print Authors Alexis

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i don't really think it mattered to her only because Tish knew that M.rs Hunt was right.

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I agree with ya'll i think somethings wrong with him or he has a weird baby fetish which is very disgusting

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Agree

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.I agree with you his connection to different people is really weird. Print Authors Alexis

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opinion

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like

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i feel like he was lost in the world and really didn't know what to do with himself

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Do Not be like your father

Follow this link to see this comment in the original context.This means The father believed everything the white people called him and told him so he’s telling the son not to be like his own father Print Authors Alexis

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I liked how he speaks so highly of his brother

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i think it because their not used to what that person believes in or it's weird to them

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i kind of think his dad was trying to help him in his own way

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I like how he clearly describes what he's talking about

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This reminds me of the book The Color Purple😬 because they have the same actions and treats colored people the same.

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i agree with you

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ig so🤷🏿‍♀️

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i agree

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frl then wanna seal sum that we invited and claim it has their own smh🚶🏿‍♀️

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who is he talking about??

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sooo black Christians had more power??

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they expected more from the boys then the girls

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did they try to defend themselves or did they just let them beat them??

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I think this means that everyone else around him grow up faster and took the wrong path.

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i liked how he expanded why he used that word (religious)

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what does that mean??

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He’s telling the son not to Care what white people think

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I agree😌

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Agreed

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I agree

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Sameee it make the story more interesting

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I like how he describers how His dad was when he was little.

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I Remember……

I Am From Brooklyn and Haiti

A Place Like Haiti

Connote of the poem

rhythm of the poem

Mood of the poem

Feeling ambitious??

Mother is to overprotective??

Feeling locked in or cornered??

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I still think he was acting too soft but I agree it was unfair to go though what he had to go though

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observation

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I agree they finally noticed reality

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i agree you can't change what's ready been done

true she really can't do it

What is she really talking about?? also when she says “it's delicious” is really weird to me

i agree but i wounder when did it first start??

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