• An important purpose of our government, as stated in the Preamble of the U.S. Constitution is to form a more perfect union. The president of the U.S. plays an important role in ensuring our government’s a

  • Dear, Jennifer

    I am intrigued with your essay about online speech because you started with a strong hook and followed with a good thesis. Your essay was clear and easy to read with proper grammar. You also include your sources very well and explain them thoroughly. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ” Essentially, schools limiting…[Read more]

  • I really like how you started with your first sentence. I also like how you mention limitations on online speech is an unrealistic goal. As well as your writing being very clear and easy to read

  • For as long as technology has been around it’s been an online gateway for cyberbullying. Although, is it right for schools to get involved in what students post at home? No. Why should they? Freedom of press and

    • Your point was very clear and strong and you backed up your claim adequately. Your use of court cases really added to the validity of your essay, so good job. Also good use of the first amendment. The political cartoon example was a good idea but could’ve been omitted as it didn’t really add much to the essay. Also next time be sure to add concessions (opposing points) to strengthen your argument. Some grammar and spelling issues but all in all really impressive! I can tell that you’ve thought a lot about this issue and made a thought out stance.

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  • Dear America,
    I am impacted by your essay, “Family Violence Affects Youth” because you included actual statistics of people being affected. You inserted citations and a reference page which was very good. I also liked how you brought up the problem of kids not being focused in school. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Be…[Read more]

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