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    My name is Alexandria,I am 16 years old,born on April 18,2001.I was born here in Aurora,Co.It’s important to know that i’m just now starting to drink coffee(iced) and its helps me wake up,now i see why peo

    Three Paragraphs About Me

    https://www.youthvoices.live/wp-content/uploads/2017/09/Vocaroo_s1KEeSR7pKgR.mp3 My name is Alexandria,I am 16 years old,born on April 18,2001.I was born here in Aurora,Co.It’s important to know that i’m just now starting to drink coffee(iced) and its helps me wake up,now i see why people drink it.I...

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    • Dear Alexandria,
      I am happy with your post ,”Three Paragraphs About Me,” because the thought flow is good. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “I like taking pictures, so it’s good for me to learn how an actual camera works” I think this is moving because you also stated that you use to have your own YouTube channel. Maybe in the future you should try again since you have more knowledge. Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next and good luck babysitting!

    • Dear Alexandria,

      I am content with your post, “Three Paragraphs About Me” because you described your everyday life, hobbies and joys in life. I appreciate the fact that you opened up to the people reading this about your family. I like that you implemented humor into your post as well.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “In school I love to go to photography class.I like taking pictures,so it’s good for me to learn how an actual camera works” because me and my friend were considering going to photography classes together. I’ve also been interested in photography in the past but I haven’t really engaged in it recently.

      Another sentence that interested me in your bio was “I absolutely love babysitting this baby’s name is Cameron he is one years old and he’s my favorite one year old in the world” I was considering babysitting too because i’m in 9th grade and literally have no other opportunity for income.

      One part of your bio that reminds me of myself is “I love lunch even though i don’t eat but it’s a great little break to have” because I’ve never really ate at lunch, and a lot of people I’ve told that to have found it weird so i’m surprised that you also do that.

      Thanks for writing “three paragraphs about me” I look forward to what you write next because your bio was posted 2 years ago and I’m wondering if you still pursue photography and volleyball.

    • Dear Alexandria,

      I am content with your post, “Three Paragraphs About Me” because you described your everyday life, hobbies and joys in life. I appreciate the fact that you opened up to the people reading this about your family. I like that you implemented humor into your post as well.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “In school I love to go to photography class.I like taking pictures,so it’s good for me to learn how an actual camera works” because me and my friend were considering going to photography classes together. I’ve also been interested in photography in the past but I haven’t really engaged in it recently.

      Another sentence that interested me in your bio was “I absolutely love babysitting this baby’s name is Cameron he is one years old and he’s my favorite one year old in the world” I was considering babysitting too because i’m in 9th grade and literally have no other opportunity for income.

      One part of your bio that reminds me of myself is “I love lunch even though i don’t eat but it’s a great little break to have” because I’ve never really ate at lunch, and a lot of people I’ve told that to have found it weird so im suprised that you also do that.

      Thanks for writing “three paragraphs about me” I look forward to what you write next because your bio was posted 2 years ago and I’m wondering if you still pursue photography and volleyball.

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