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Alejandro wrote a new post
He remembers waking up to me saying, “Wake up! Mom is cooking up some pancakes.”
He remembers playing guitar and singing Blackbird by The Beatles in front of me and my younger brother.
He remembers giving me his
Read MoreHe remembers waking up to me saying, "Wake up! Mom is cooking up some pancakes." He remembers playing guitar and singing Blackbird by The Beatles in front of me and my younger brother. He remembers giving me his Sony walkman. He remembers telling...
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Alejandro wrote a new post
Stretching out like a mop
The featured spikes take
Over its body. So dead, color
Of the wet sand. Rigid
like a quebracho trunk.
The Bizarre creature fits in a child’s palm.
But it’s soulless now. The sp
Read MoreStretching out like a mop The featured spikes take Over its body. So dead, color Of the wet sand. Rigid like a quebracho trunk. The Bizarre creature fits in a child's palm. But it’s soulless now. The spikes Chipping off one by one. The starfish gazing at...
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hey alejandro…
good poem, it show the star fish. the poem also helps people and readers understand how the star fish would
feel when they touch it for the first time. it shows the features of the star fish. vary intersting poem. i would love to read more about the star fish. -
Hey Al great poem very deep,after reading your poem I’ve come to believe that this poem is a metaphor for a insecure child.The “featured spikes” on the starfish are his insecurities taking over his body.Eating away at him,slowly sucking his “color” away,looking dead.He lays on his bed,still as a rock,what remains of him can now fit on a child’s hand but is soulless.
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i liked how you described your star fish, better than taes
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Alejandro wrote a new post
You’ll bring my heart to a stop
Please just do it
I like the feeling
Of your presence
Sweet and white as a dove
Bring my me closer.
Use it
Feel the comfort of me
like if I were a bla
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I think that this is very beautiful and the fact that this can be interpreted in so many different ways for different people is amazing. I like the structure of your poem a lot and it flows wonderfully and makes the ideas stand out and become more dramatic. I really enjoyed this and I hope that you write more poetry!
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Alejandro wrote a new post
I am from Umbrellas,
Pond’s Cream and Valeriana.
I am from choo-choo trains to Flying Kites that soar through the air. From using Imagination to create the atmosphere I want. I am from piggyback rides
Read MoreI am from Umbrellas, Pond’s Cream and Valeriana. I am from choo-choo trains to Flying Kites that soar through the air. From using Imagination to create the atmosphere I want. I am from piggyback rides to swinging and water gun...
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What I like about your’s poem that you use fantasy and your thinking
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This is a very nice poem, obviously it has meaning to you. Good Job