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Alaina rated 5 stars Clementines
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Alaina commented on the post, Clementines
I love your poem, Lily! Your poem is relatable to readers since many people have had the great experience of enjoying a tangy orange on a cold, winter day. You’re right; I associate oranges with winter more than summer because for some reason, our house always has clementines in the winter.
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Alaina commented on the post, Use Your Breath
Nice poem, Lauren!
It felt like I was on a beach, spending time noticing the wind in my hair and the sand on my feet. I like your word choice — I was able to visualize vivid imagery when I read these lines:
“As eels wrap themselves around your limbs,
Swallow the choking feeling,
Grab hold of their tails.
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