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    Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez

    I am so happy to hear your great respond to the question in  your Instagram video because I do agree with what you were saying the new generation are sensitive in positive

    Our Generation is Sensitive in a Positive Way

    Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez I am so happy to hear your great respond to the question in  your Instagram video because I do agree with what you were saying the new generation are sensitive in positive way. I think the question...

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    • Dear Ahmede:
      I am amazed with your post , “Our Generation is Sensitive in a Positive Way,” because you talk about how the new generations are able to talk to one another and learn from previous mistakes. It shows how the acceptance and knowledge is growing which will change our future. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “…young people tend to care more about the future and are hoping to put in the extra work to achieve their goals.” I think this is great because it shows how the new generations have goals in mind, and are working hard to better our world. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I like how you specifically wrote to Representative Ocasio-Cortez, whom I believe is a great leader during these times. I also agreed with your additional thoughts, so I would like to continue reading more.

      Zhelanea Quinteros

  • Dear Emely

    I really like your writing, since your title is your ‘hook’ that took my attention. The fact that education is the world’s key made your writing most likely to take people’s attention. I strongly agree with every single word you wrote in your essay. The way you figure out the writing strategy shows that you read the three stori…Read More

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    The best way to enjoy reading different stories is by choosing the stories that have connections between the stories and your real life. That what we do in our class, where we had to choose three stories to read

    Comparing three similar and different stories

    The best way to enjoy reading different stories is by choosing the stories that have connections between the stories and your real life. That what we do in our class, where we had to choose three stories to read and...

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    • Dear Ahmed,

      I am intrigued about your post, “ Comparing three similar and different stories” because it is talking about the meaning of life. In life we meet new people and learn from each other. I really enjoyed the way you described and connected these three stories as specifically life and the people around you. The new people can influence our lives positively or negatively. However, we have to deal with this conflict and work on ourselves or others things to make it better.

      The one line stands out for me “ The only thing that could change their lives, is to send them to school, in other words the only right they should fight about we’re getting educated” even though you have given priotese about people, at the same time you have valued how education is important. All the children in the nation have a right to get the opportunity to have a higher education. As a thought, all the youth should take action about the fact that many children are deprived of education.

      I am really interested in your wonderful writing. This writing helps me to understand “ Everyday use, The Lesson and How to date Brown girls “are connected.

      Thanks for your poem. I am looking forward to seeing what you make next.

  • Ahmed commented on the post, Mom Obligation

    Dear Emely
    I appreciate you that you focus in Mama struggles in her life, You did a great job, most of us were focusing in Maggie and her sister, while the main character who faced a lot of issues wad the Mama. You just change our opinion about Mama, while we were thinking that she wasn’t fair with treating her daughters. However now we know by…Read More

  • Dear Hanna
    I literally read what I should read in the real story Everyday Use. Your imagination show the real conflict that Mama and her daughters had about the quilt. Each one of them had her claimed of what is the best for the quilt. You did great job, isn’t easy to predict the whole argument between the family, but you did very well.

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