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  • ahmede
  • Bronx, New York, USA
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  • Ahmed wrote a new post

    Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez

    I am so happy to hear your great respond to the question in  your Instagram video because I do agree with what you were saying the new generation are sensitive in positive

    Our Generation is Sensitive in a Positive Way

    Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez I am so happy to hear your great respond to the question in  your Instagram video because I do agree with what you were saying the new generation are sensitive in positive way. I think the question...

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    • Dear Ahmede:
      I am amazed with your post , “Our Generation is Sensitive in a Positive Way,” because you talk about how the new generations are able to talk to one another and learn from previous mistakes. It shows how the acceptance and knowledge is growing which will change our future. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “…young people tend to care more about the future and are hoping to put in the extra work to achieve their goals.” I think this is great because it shows how the new generations have goals in mind, and are working hard to better our world. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I like how you specifically wrote to Representative Ocasio-Cortez, whom I believe is a great leader during these times. I also agreed with your additional thoughts, so I would like to continue reading more.

      Zhelanea Quinteros

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    The best way to enjoy reading different stories is by choosing the stories that have connections between the stories and your real life. That what we do in our class, where we had to choose three stories to read

    Comparing three similar and different stories

    The best way to enjoy reading different stories is by choosing the stories that have connections between the stories and your real life. That what we do in our class, where we had to choose three stories to read and...

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    • Dear Ahmed,

      I am intrigued about your post, “ Comparing three similar and different stories” because it is talking about the meaning of life. In life we meet new people and learn from each other. I really enjoyed the way you described and connected these three stories as specifically life and the people around you. The new people can influence our lives positively or negatively. However, we have to deal with this conflict and work on ourselves or others things to make it better.

      The one line stands out for me “ The only thing that could change their lives, is to send them to school, in other words the only right they should fight about we’re getting educated” even though you have given priotese about people, at the same time you have valued how education is important. All the children in the nation have a right to get the opportunity to have a higher education. As a thought, all the youth should take action about the fact that many children are deprived of education.

      I am really interested in your wonderful writing. This writing helps me to understand “ Everyday use, The Lesson and How to date Brown girls “are connected.

      Thanks for your poem. I am looking forward to seeing what you make next.

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    After you made your decisionThat just led me to overthinkingAnd you did ImplementationJust like you knew everythingYou never thought right informationAbout me, that’s the thingYou decided with emotion On M

    In a rare writing way, I predict a part of the story's future.

    After you made your decisionThat just led me to overthinkingAnd you did ImplementationJust like you knew everythingYou never thought right informationAbout me, that’s the thingYou decided with emotion On Maggie issues you focusingShe suffering with dissatisfactionDoesn’t mean she is...

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    • Dear Ahmed:

      I am touched and inspired by your writing skills. The short poem called “ In a rare writing way, I predict a part of the story’s future.” let us thinking about what would happen after the end of the real story. Would Dee able to respond her Mom like that, you made me think about what is pretty interesting you let the reader wonder by calling his attention.

      I also impress by the audio music background matched very well with your voices and letters congratulation!!!
      One lines that stands out for me is, “I study the past in my education and somehow that moved my feelings” because, is saying that after Dee finish her education at college help her to be a mature person and be reasonable about her surroundings and what changes they need in the time.

      Your poem reminds me why education is so important, that’s the only way we can change the society. Thank you so much I wish you the best, I hope to read another of your writing soon.

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