Dear Ahmede:
I am amazed with your post , “Our Generation is Sensitive in a Positive Way,” because you talk about how the new generations are able to talk to one another and learn from previous mistakes. It shows how the acceptance and knowledge is growing which will change our future. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “…young people tend to care more about the future and are hoping to put in the extra work to achieve their goals.” I think this is great because it shows how the new generations have goals in mind, and are working hard to better our world. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I like how you specifically wrote to Representative Ocasio-Cortez, whom I believe is a great leader during these times. I also agreed with your additional thoughts, so I would like to continue reading more.

Zhelanea Quinteros

Dear Ahmed,

I am intrigued about your post, “ Comparing three similar and different stories” because it is talking about the meaning of life. In life we meet new people and learn from each other. I really enjoyed the way you described and connected these three stories as specifically life and the people around you. The new people can influence our lives positively or negatively. However, we have to deal with this conflict and work on ourselves or others things to make it better.

The one line stands out for me “ The only thing that could change their lives, is to send them to school, in other words the only right they should fight about we’re getting educated” even though you have given priotese about people, at the same time you have valued how education is important. All the children in the nation have a right to get the opportunity to have a higher education. As a thought, all the youth should take action about the fact that many children are deprived of education.

I am really interested in your wonderful writing. This writing helps me to understand “ Everyday use, The Lesson and How to date Brown girls “are connected.

Thanks for your poem. I am looking forward to seeing what you make next.