Zaveen, as you put yourself into the shoes of the character you create a unique perspective for the audience. I wonder how you would explain this story to someone who is unfamiliar to it and if you could do it as this character? I find your speech to be very captivating.

Breanna, I really like how you put yourself into a first person perspective from the story. What makes you feel a connection to the character and yourself? I would like to see a longer statement to see if this can be stronger.

Samani, I believe your title isn’t only eye catching but it makes your writing stronger. I salute your boldness and find your ability to connect to the danger of stereotypes into your writing is great work. I wonder what made you write from this perspective?

Jalia, you did a very good job in detailing the issue presented. I find almost zero faults and wonder what makes you intrigued with this topic? I also like that your cover image shows a sense of community

Rossana, your title was very eye-catching. I wonder what is the meaning behind your cover image? I also like that you include the cultural and economic significance of the city of Atlanta, this strengthens the reasoning as to why this is such a large issue for the community.