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My name is Andrea Fonseca, I’m a sophomore at Oakland Unity High School. In my English class we’ve been reading about robots and artificial intelligence and the potential dangers that both might bring. I feel t
Andrea commented on the post, Oakland Police Department Bond with the Oakland Community
Dear Alberto, Alejandro and Aaron
This is a great topic to talk about, I liked how you guys connected all the cases and also ICE since most of our community is immigrant. I liked how you guys focused in Oakland and give statistics, also how you guys used pathos and ethos. But sometimes the Police doesn’t have a choice but I get that violence most…Read More
Andrea commented on the post, Children Are Not For Sale
Dear Jennifer, Melody and francisco,
I appreciated that you guys share this with us, since it’s a big issue not only in Oakland it’s all over the world. I liked the fact that you guys add logos, pathos and ethos. This is a very interested topic but I feel you guys can add more logos about Oakland like, What’s the percentage of Child Traffic here…Read More
Andrea commented on the post, Feel it Still
This is so powerful! Wow I’m literally speechless, It’s too sad to read this and realize the type of things you had to go through. But you are a strong person because you had the courage to share this type of topics with us. Thank you for sharing.
Andrea commented on the post, There's More To Life Than Just Pain
This post is so powerful!! You had the courage to share with us the things that you feel and that is really hard because not many people are so strong to talk about this topics since for to many people this kind of topics are a “bad” thing but in reality is not. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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