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aflores commented on the post, Goku vs Hulk
Nice story dude!
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aflores commented on the post, STOP the child abuse!
Dear Joanna
I have a question after reading this. What made you write about this topic? -
aflores commented on the post, STOP the child abuse!
Dear Joanna
I had a question after reading this. What made you write about this topic? -
aflores wrote a new post
Dear Future president,
First I want to tell you congratulate on being the next president and i just wanted to bring up something that was horrible wrong was the topic about police brutality. We need a president
Read MoreDear Future president, First I want to tell you congratulate on being the next president and i just wanted to bring up something that was horrible wrong was the topic about police brutality. We need a president who will be...
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I think that you might have a good concept here but a lot of the meaning is lost by the errors you have in your essay. Semantically, gramatically, and with your spelling mistakes I find myself disenfranchised with your paper and struggle to find its purpose. I would say give it a once over to elaborate on ideas and correct mistakes.