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Adila commented on the post, brooklyn bridge
this is a very nice story and interesting i really like but it should get more information then it would become more interesting.
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Adila commented on the post, short story
very nice story and its short but perfect.
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Adila commented on the post, short story
i think u should have added a bit more information but its interesting
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Adila commented on the post, short story
Dear Humera,
I am excited about your story “Bridge,” because it makes me think of how famous it must be that so many people come there.
One part of your story that stands out for me is where you describe that you can feel fresh air. I think this is true because that is why many people should be coming over there and THAT IS WHY I go.…Read More
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We all get many stresses in our daily life for, example as we decide to do something today but we can’t and we keep on thinking about it over and over that we will do it tomorrow. Which has a big impact on us b
Read MoreWe all get many stresses in our daily life for, example as we decide to do something today but we can’t and we keep on thinking about it over and over that we will do it tomorrow. Which has...
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