• Wow, what an interesting theory! I love your specific examples- they really helped guide your point along. This post is filled with so much feminism without directly calling it out, and I just love your question. Good job!

    -Adelle

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  • Simplicity.

    Now that is a crisp word. It sounds nice. It has a pleasant ring to it. The double ‘s’ sound gives an almost internal alliteration, despite it being only a single word. The flick of the ‘p’ is subtle,

    • Adelle,
      I found this post very interesting. I too enjoy the simple things. I think you would enjoy this article (link below) about how to live a more content life. I thought the way you ended the essay with “I want all of these things. They remind me of when I was younger, and they emanate a feeling of comfort. Simplicity is calming and neutral and pure and joyful. And happiness, the thing I strive for most, can only result from simplicity” was very compelling and accurate of living a simple life. I look forward to reading more of your posts.

      Peaceful Simplicity: How to Live a Life of Contentment

    • Dear Adelle,

      I’m sure I don’t have to tell you this, but simplicity and care for the little things is an absolute necessity in life. I am a lot like you actually, I am student who procrastinates and has many responsibilities. And like you, if I don’t appreciate the little things in life, I’d go crazy. I think you summed it up well, ” those tiny simple moments that make you feel warm and fuzzy despite the unnatural chaos of our world.” Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I’m glad to hear someone shares my view.

  • Adelle commented on the post, Hear Me Out 1 month ago

    Hi Julia!

    I like your thoughts on America’s foreign involvement and the importance of using your voice. I’ve read a few of these posts, and I thought you were nice and clear about the specific change you want to see in the government, and it was good to see that you provided an actual solution to the problems you addressed. Be sure to proofread…[Read more]

  • Hi Javier!

    I love your opinions on the current situation of America, but I also have some suggestions to improve your writing and argument structure. Just from a grammar standpoint, make sure to proofread your writing for typos. Many of your sentences do not have a space at all after the period.

    Also, when you quote someone, only use quotation…[Read more]

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