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Adanely commented on the post, Is smoking weed an addiction in Oakland?
Gladys,
if you want to know more you can visit this page http://www.theoaklandpress.com/article/op/20130919/NEWS/130919073
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To begin, the novel Uglies does connect to the 2017 world because in the book there is 2 groups of people, the uglies and the pretties. This connects to 2017 because Donald Trump is separating the the colored
Read MoreTo begin, the novel Uglies does connect to the 2017 world because in the book there is 2 groups of people, the uglies and the pretties. This connects to 2017 because Donald Trump is separating the the colored people with...
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Adanely commented on the post, What does it mean to be a well trained police officer?
Dear Noyoltzin
I am excited about your post What does it mean to be a well trained police officer? because you have really interesting facts about the training. One thing you wrote that was interesting was the fact that you put the training in your article.
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Weed is legal, but do teens use it appropriately?
Drugs are bad for you because once you use it once you will get addicted to them. Neighborhoods don’t agree with children having to use drugs to be relax. P
Read MoreWeed is legal, but do teens use it appropriately? Drugs are bad for you because once you use it once you will get addicted to them. Neighborhoods don't agree with children having to use drugs to be relax. People in...
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Adanely,
It is enlightening to see that you are interested in bringing this topic up and incorporating real life issues from your community. It is concerning to hear that marijuana use is becoming so big among youth and I would like to hear more of what your community members think about this.
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Gladys,
if you want to know more you can visit this page http://www.theoaklandpress.com/article/op/20130919/NEWS/130919073
it tells you how oakland has dealt with drugs.
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Dear Adanely,
I am moved by your post “How does Uglies connect to the 2017 world?” because I have seen these similarities as well. I think making a connection between the world and literature is very important and you have made a very meaningful one. This makes me think that more people should read your novel to understand better what is happening right now in the world. If in the book, it is considered a dystopia, why are people accepting what is happening today?
Some feedback for your writing to remember: It is important to not use “you” in academic writing and to really think who that “you” is. Is it people? Is it adults? Is it teenagers? The more precise you are the stronger your writing will be.
Thanks for your post and look forward to reading what you write next.