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    if you want to know more you can visit this page http://www.theoaklandpress.com/article/op/20130919/NEWS/130919073
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    To begin, the novel Uglies does connect to the 2017 world because in the book there is 2 groups of people, the uglies and the pretties. This connects to 2017 because Donald Trump is separating the the colored

    How does "Uglies" connect to the 2017 world?

    To begin, the novel Uglies does connect to the 2017 world because in the book there is 2 groups of people, the uglies and the pretties. This connects to 2017 because Donald Trump is separating the the colored people with...

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    • Dear Adanely,

      I am moved by your post “How does Uglies connect to the 2017 world?” because I have seen these similarities as well. I think making a connection between the world and literature is very important and you have made a very meaningful one. This makes me think that more people should read your novel to understand better what is happening right now in the world. If in the book, it is considered a dystopia, why are people accepting what is happening today?

      Some feedback for your writing to remember: It is important to not use “you” in academic writing and to really think who that “you” is. Is it people? Is it adults? Is it teenagers? The more precise you are the stronger your writing will be.

      Thanks for your post and look forward to reading what you write next.

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    I am excited about your post What does it mean to be a well trained police officer? because you have really interesting facts about the training. One thing you wrote that was interesting was the fact that you put the training in your article.

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    Weed is legal, but do teens use it appropriately?

     

    Drugs are bad for you because once you use it once you will get addicted to them. Neighborhoods don’t agree with children having to use drugs  to be relax. P

    Is smoking weed an addiction in Oakland?

    Weed is legal, but do teens use it appropriately?   Drugs are bad for you because once you use it once you will get addicted to them. Neighborhoods don't agree with children having to use drugs  to be relax. People in...

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