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Aboubakar commented on the post, AOC Makes Me Giddy! 1 week, 4 days ago
Dear Leticia
I agree with your letter, “AOC Makes Me Giddy!” because < today generation is fighting to make their life the best. There are a lot of people today and there are not a lot of a good job of them. Therefore they have each have to fight to become the best.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I think the young gener…[Read more]-
Aboubakar wrote a new post, The Future Started Yesterday 1 week, 4 days ago
Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez,
I feel proud of your Instagram video because I know that there is someone in the government who can advocate for us while we are on the street. In order to fight we need two
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Aboubakar commented on the post, The Makeup of One Beautiful Composition 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Dear FATOUMATA :
I am angry about, your letter, “The Makeup of One Beautiful Composition,” because any child in this world has to go to school. School is made to educate kids, to prepare them for the future. And if today there is a child who doesn’t go the first person to ask why are his/her parents.
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Aboubakar commented on the post, Struggles of Minorities 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Dear HANNA :
I am shocked about, your letter, “Struggles of Minorities,” because of the kind. Your mention in your letter. Today we are doing everything to make our world better. We also know that one day we will have to give the sit the kids. But what if the kids are not even prepared. All the things we been doing will be equal to zero.
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Aboubakar commented on the post, The Brightness of Education 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Dear Houssenatou:
I am really sad about your letter, “The Brightness of Education,” because hearing that the kid who will change the world in the future is uneducated. I wonder what the future will be if these kids stay uneducated.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “The narrator was teaching a young adult boy to know diffe…[Read more] -
Aboubakar wrote a new post, Life Lesson 2 months ago
By reading the three stories: Everyday use, the lesson, and how to date a girl, I see they are all connect to each other. These connections are based on the literature element we use to compare them. In this p
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Aboubakar commented on the post, Charter Schools 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Dear Charter School:
I am disbelief with your short stor>, “Charter Schools,” because A charter school is learned by the community. The society that lives with the students and sees what the students face in order to succeed. This society knows what we call to suffer and for in the world they let their children suffer as they did in the pas…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, The Hardest Letter to Write 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Dear Abigail
I am hurt by, your letter, “The hardest Letter to Write,” because of the things that you wrote about your mom. Yeah, sometimes we kind of having the exact feeling but it is not the truth.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “It feels strange and sad that mom tells us that she loves equal to both but she always treat…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, Maggie's Diary 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Dear Celine:
I am happy with your Journal, “Maggie’s Diary,” because this story is told the Important keys for family members to live together. These keys are only the basis for only family members but also for the whole world.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “we need to know the person first that judges their actions or how…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, My true feelings 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Dear Eros
I am choked by, your letter, “My true feelings>,” because a lot of children in this world thing that their mothers or their families don’t love them, but they are wrong.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “At some point, she was so sure that I was literally nothing that she made me believe that I really was just a simpl…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, Charter Schools 4 months ago
Dear Charter School:
I am disbelief with your short stor>, “Charter Schools,” because A charter school is learned by the community. The society that lives with the students and sees what the students face in order to succeed. This society knows what we call to suffer and for in the world they let their children suffer as they did in the pas…[Read more] -
Aboubakar wrote a new post, What is a Friend? 4 months ago
I’m going to rewrite “ Everyday Use” by Alice Walker as a girl who hates her family, from the point of view and narrative voice of Maggie, and include these details from the story “Dee is lighter than Maggie,
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Dear Aboubakar
I am feeling surprise after having read your create and unusual explanation about your story called “ What is a friend?” which made me think that maybe the main characters from “Everyday Use” are going to meet a new person but I am confused about the topic how they connect with each other.
One of the lines that stands out for me is,“ Sometimes I wonder if I have to kill my sister for not saving me when the old house was burning on me” I think that Mom after read this lines she was in shock, was hard for her to understand why Maggie was feeling in that way. I guess that after finding this Mom, start to act differently, so Maggie can feel the support that her family has for her.
I also believe that by Mom find this notebook made her feel worry about her family unity and harmony during the period of time.Thank you so much for your story help us to understand what made people to commit suicide sometimes because they do not have enough support to overcome their problems I wish you the best.
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Aboubakar became a registered member 4 months ago
Dear Abooubakar:
I am satisfied with your story, “ Life Lesson,” because it talked a lot about education and how people should know the meaning of education. I really like that you explain the importance of being educated and having an education. One sentence that stands out to me is, “ In the literature element of the theme, the three stories are connected to each other because the objective of the narrators wanted to show the reader how connection between our life and the life of other people is important?”. I think this line is interesting because when readers are reading books they should or must see themselves in it. As for me, reading makes my mind travel away, trying to build images and to connect it with the real world that we are living in right now. So if an author is trying to teach the readers how our life is connected in each other, we all should know that the fact of reading is not just to have fun but to see yourself inside. Another line that stands out for me is, “ these stories are good to study in college or in high school, because it makes the student learn more about literature elements.” I think this line is thought-provoking because it’s kinda telling HS students to read more, which is what it’s supposed to be but they don’t, and to not just read as they were told to but try to see what’s the inside and the outside of the book. Your story reminds me of my sister who has trouble learning. She always wants to go to school but my mom wanted her to go to an arabic school, because she was not good enough to speak or learn french. So she ends up taking coranic classes and now her french level is high and she can speak and write it. Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I would like to see more about what you will bring next and tell me about fun stories maybe
Thanks! For sharing this with us
Have a great adventure!
Dear Aboubakkar
I am enthusiastic about your post, “ Life lesson” because it emphasizes how three of the stories connect with each other somewhat. Most importantly, it is talking about the importance of education. How education can make it better out life situation
The one line that stands out for me is, “ this is important to talk about education of children because the future depends on the children” this is a really good statement and even realistic because Today’s children tomorrow’s future. We should push and teach the children the right things in order to make the world modern or digital country.
Your writing helps me to understand “ Everyday use, The Lesson and How to date Brown girls “are hooked up together. All of these story narrators are learning from their mistakes. Every day Mama did not give the same love and promoted her both children but at the end both had the same attention from their mom. Even though they all are living a generation,where not everything is accessible but they evolve and adapt themselves to make a great influence on their life. I really like your thoughts and ideas and it was phenomenal to see how you connect them.
Thanks for your poem. I am looking forward to seeing what you make next.
I am impressed by your analysis essay, “Life lesson” because it emphasizes the importance of education. It talks about education is our future more than anything.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “” I think this is really powerful because nowadays people focus on education just because they want to have a stable job in future. Meanwhile education could also make you a better and enhance your understanding of the word.
Another sentence that caught my attention was: “ these stories are good to study in college or in high school, because it makes the student learn more about literature elements.” This stood out for me because I feel like these stories are full of political issues and can awaken our critical thinking still.
Have you seen the movie “Lucy” ? https://www.netflix.com/gb/title/70307658 I thought you might be interested in this because of the intellectual aspect of it.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I really like the way you write in a simple but efficient way.
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Dear Aboubakar,
I am impressed by your analysis essay, “Life lesson” because it emphasizes the importance of education. It talks about education is our future more than anything.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “this is important to talk about education of children because the future depends on the children” I think this is really powerful because nowadays people focus on education just because they want to have a stable job in future. Meanwhile education could also make you a better and enhance your understanding of the word.
Another sentence that caught my attention was: “ these stories are good to study in college or in high school, because it makes the student learn more about literature elements.” This stood out for me because I feel like these stories are full of political issues and can awaken our critical thinking still.
Have you seen the movie “Lucy” ? https://www.netflix.com/gb/title/70307658 I thought you might be interested in this because of the intellectual aspect of it.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I really like the way you write in a simple but efficient way.