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Aboubakar commented on the post, Charter Schools 5 days, 2 hours ago
Dear Charter School:
I am disbelief with your short stor>, “Charter Schools,” because A charter school is learned by the community. The society that lives with the students and sees what the students face in order to succeed. This society knows what we call to suffer and for in the world they let their children suffer as they did in the pas…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, The Hardest Letter to Write 5 days, 2 hours ago
Dear Abigail
I am hurt by, your letter, “The hardest Letter to Write,” because of the things that you wrote about your mom. Yeah, sometimes we kind of having the exact feeling but it is not the truth.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “It feels strange and sad that mom tells us that she loves equal to both but she always treat…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, Maggie's Diary 5 days, 2 hours ago
Dear Celine:
I am happy with your Journal, “Maggie’s Diary,” because this story is told the Important keys for family members to live together. These keys are only the basis for only family members but also for the whole world.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “we need to know the person first that judges their actions or how…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, My true feelings 5 days, 2 hours ago
Dear Eros
I am choked by, your letter, “My true feelings>,” because a lot of children in this world thing that their mothers or their families don’t love them, but they are wrong.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “At some point, she was so sure that I was literally nothing that she made me believe that I really was just a simpl…[Read more] -
Aboubakar commented on the post, Charter Schools 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Dear Charter School:
I am disbelief with your short stor>, “Charter Schools,” because A charter school is learned by the community. The society that lives with the students and sees what the students face in order to succeed. This society knows what we call to suffer and for in the world they let their children suffer as they did in the pas…[Read more] -
Aboubakar wrote a new post, What is a Friend? 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I’m going to rewrite “ Everyday Use” by Alice Walker as a girl who hates her family, from the point of view and narrative voice of Maggie, and include these details from the story “Dee is lighter than Maggie,
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Dear Aboubakar
I am feeling surprise after having read your create and unusual explanation about your story called “ What is a friend?” which made me think that maybe the main characters from “Everyday Use” are going to meet a new person but I am confused about the topic how they connect with each other.
One of the lines that stands out for me is,“ Sometimes I wonder if I have to kill my sister for not saving me when the old house was burning on me” I think that Mom after read this lines she was in shock, was hard for her to understand why Maggie was feeling in that way. I guess that after finding this Mom, start to act differently, so Maggie can feel the support that her family has for her.
I also believe that by Mom find this notebook made her feel worry about her family unity and harmony during the period of time.
Thank you so much for your story help us to understand what made people to commit suicide sometimes because they do not have enough support to overcome their problems I wish you the best.