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    Recently, I read ”The Glass Menagerie”, by Tennessee Williams. I was surprised by this play. This play about a family where there is no such love between the members of the family. The father abandoned them W

    Family story

    Recently, I read ”The Glass Menagerie”, by Tennessee Williams. I was surprised by this play. This play about a family where there is no such love between the members of the family. The father abandoned them When the children were too small. The...

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    • Do you think there will ever be a society where people love each other and willingly help each other? If not, how do will deal with conflicts like the one in this ply?

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    Tom is a dynamic character. His archetype changes over the course of the play. At the beginning of the play, he is the archetypal busy‑body. This can be seen in paragraph 170, where the author writes: “TOM

    People change

    Tom is a dynamic character. His archetype changes over the course of the play. At the beginning of the play, he is the archetypal busy‑body. This can be seen in paragraph 170, where the author writes: “TOM: I'm starting to boil inside. I...

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    Amanda, the protagonist in ”The Glass Menagerie,” has a few traits that influence her relationships with others.

    One, she is Hopeful. Two, she is careful. Three, she is  These traits influence her relati

    Our behavior

    Amanda, the protagonist in ”The Glass Menagerie,” has a few traits that influence her relationships with others. One, she is Hopeful. Two, she is careful. Three, she is  These traits influence her relationships with others. “AMANDA: You are the only young man that...

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    In the third and the fourth scene, we can see that there is a fight between tom and his mother, at the begging and Tom, went to the movies all night. After making her mother get mad at her and told him that she

    Mother and children relationship in the 1930s

    In the third and the fourth scene, we can see that there is a fight between tom and his mother, at the begging and Tom, went to the movies all night. After making her mother get mad at her and...

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    According to my understanding, this play is about a family made up of a mother, a son, and a daughter. The mother wants her daughter to stay in school and she doesn’t want it. Therefore the mother wants her to

    A poor family in the 1930s

    According to my understanding, this play is about a family made up of a mother, a son, and a daughter. The mother wants her daughter to stay in school and she doesn’t want it. Therefore the mother wants her to get...

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    Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez,

    I feel proud of your Instagram video because I know that there is someone in the government who can advocate for us while we are on the street. In order to fight we need two

    The Future Started Yesterday

    Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez, I feel proud of your Instagram video because I know that there is someone in the government who can advocate for us while we are on the street. In order to fight we need two groups: one in...

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    • Dear Aboubakar

      I am feeling very happy by your letter “The Future Started Yesterday,” because the title makes me think that our future started at the ready . We have to take more consideration of what we are doing right now because of the impact on the environment. I support both videos. These teenagers are a pretty good example of activism who want to cause change in today’s society.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ In order to fight we need two groups: one in the streets to convince people outside to fight for their rights and another group inside the government to convince the government to vote for the law.” I think this is important because people in the government should also support the society’s opinions. Trying to solve the problems that all of us face.
      Another sentence that I liked was: “This is basically saying that it is our duty to protect all the things that give us life in order to make the future butter.” This stood out for me because we destroy the planet, we are responsible for taking care of the planet and no one is going to do it for us.

      Have you seen this article https://dailycampus.com/stories/2020/4/22/how-you-are-d estroying-the-plaNet-and-how-you-can-do-better I thought you might be interested in this because explain who have being blame for the pollution in the earth.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.

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    By reading the three stories: Everyday use, the lesson, and how to date a girl, I see they are all connect to each other.  These connections are based on the literature element we use to compare them. In this p

    Life Lesson

    By reading the three stories: Everyday use, the lesson, and how to date a girl, I see they are all connect to each other.  These connections are based on the literature element we use to compare them. In this project,...

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    • Dear Abooubakar:
      I am satisfied with your story, “ Life Lesson,” because it talked a lot about education and how people should know the meaning of education. I really like that you explain the importance of being educated and having an education. One sentence that stands out to me is, “ In the literature element of the theme, the three stories are connected to each other because the objective of the narrators wanted to show the reader how connection between our life and the life of other people is important?”. I think this line is interesting because when readers are reading books they should or must see themselves in it. As for me, reading makes my mind travel away, trying to build images and to connect it with the real world that we are living in right now. So if an author is trying to teach the readers how our life is connected in each other, we all should know that the fact of reading is not just to have fun but to see yourself inside. Another line that stands out for me is, “ these stories are good to study in college or in high school, because it makes the student learn more about literature elements.” I think this line is thought-provoking because it’s kinda telling HS students to read more, which is what it’s supposed to be but they don’t, and to not just read as they were told to but try to see what’s the inside and the outside of the book. Your story reminds me of my sister who has trouble learning. She always wants to go to school but my mom wanted her to go to an arabic school, because she was not good enough to speak or learn french. So she ends up taking coranic classes and now her french level is high and she can speak and write it. Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I would like to see more about what you will bring next and tell me about fun stories maybe
      Thanks! For sharing this with us
      Have a great adventure!

    • Dear Aboubakkar

      I am enthusiastic about your post, “ Life lesson” because it emphasizes how three of the stories connect with each other somewhat. Most importantly, it is talking about the importance of education. How education can make it better out life situation

      The one line that stands out for me is, “ this is important to talk about education of children because the future depends on the children” this is a really good statement and even realistic because Today’s children tomorrow’s future. We should push and teach the children the right things in order to make the world modern or digital country.
      Your writing helps me to understand “ Everyday use, The Lesson and How to date Brown girls “are hooked up together. All of these story narrators are learning from their mistakes. Every day Mama did not give the same love and promoted her both children but at the end both had the same attention from their mom. Even though they all are living a generation,where not everything is accessible but they evolve and adapt themselves to make a great influence on their life. I really like your thoughts and ideas and it was phenomenal to see how you connect them.

      Thanks for your poem. I am looking forward to seeing what you make next.

    • I am impressed by your analysis essay, “Life lesson” because it emphasizes the importance of education. It talks about education is our future more than anything.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “” I think this is really powerful because nowadays people focus on education just because they want to have a stable job in future. Meanwhile education could also make you a better and enhance your understanding of the word.
      Another sentence that caught my attention was: “ these stories are good to study in college or in high school, because it makes the student learn more about literature elements.” This stood out for me because I feel like these stories are full of political issues and can awaken our critical thinking still.
      Have you seen the movie “Lucy” ? https://www.netflix.com/gb/title/70307658 I thought you might be interested in this because of the intellectual aspect of it.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I really like the way you write in a simple but efficient way.

    • Dear Aboubakar,

      I am impressed by your analysis essay, “Life lesson” because it emphasizes the importance of education. It talks about education is our future more than anything.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “this is important to talk about education of children because the future depends on the children” I think this is really powerful because nowadays people focus on education just because they want to have a stable job in future. Meanwhile education could also make you a better and enhance your understanding of the word.
      Another sentence that caught my attention was: “ these stories are good to study in college or in high school, because it makes the student learn more about literature elements.” This stood out for me because I feel like these stories are full of political issues and can awaken our critical thinking still.
      Have you seen the movie “Lucy” ? https://www.netflix.com/gb/title/70307658 I thought you might be interested in this because of the intellectual aspect of it.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I really like the way you write in a simple but efficient way.

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    I’m going to rewrite “ Everyday Use” by Alice Walker as a girl who hates her family, from the point of view and narrative voice of Maggie, and include these details from the story “Dee is lighter than Maggie,

    What is a Friend?

    I’m going to rewrite “ Everyday Use” by Alice Walker as a girl who hates her family, from the point of view and narrative voice of Maggie, and include these details from the story “Dee is lighter than Maggie,...

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    • Dear Aboubakar

      I am feeling surprise after having read your create and unusual explanation about your story called “ What is a friend?” which made me think that maybe the main characters from “Everyday Use” are going to meet a new person but I am confused about the topic how they connect with each other.

      One of the lines that stands out for me is,“ Sometimes I wonder if I have to kill my sister for not saving me when the old house was burning on me” I think that Mom after read this lines she was in shock, was hard for her to understand why Maggie was feeling in that way. I guess that after finding this Mom, start to act differently, so Maggie can feel the support that her family has for her.
      I also believe that by Mom find this notebook made her feel worry about her family unity and harmony during the period of time.

      Thank you so much for your story help us to understand what made people to commit suicide sometimes because they do not have enough support to overcome their problems I wish you the best.

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